so lovely :) I hope you will do more gelphie fics

Awww this story is so cute!
Plus it's refreshing to see a kindly written Fieyero! Everyone seems to write him as a jerk when he really wasn't!

Couldn't stop reading this, you wrote a wonderful detailed story. Beautiful :)

M... fiery, and yet not explicit imagery and detail into the love life of the two, yet I still feel like you had explained it all. Isn't that funny? You could work on a little thing my teachers taught me: No Two Sentences Begin With The Same Word. For short, NTSBWTSW. Your paragraphs seem to have lots of it so you might want to work on it.

I don't know if you know what I do, but I go through and review mostly un-finished stories. I'm here to say that if you see my reviews, they'll be trying to get the authors back on track. Your story however is complete and it ROCKS! I LOVE the Elphie/ Glinda fanfics. They're awesome, even if they go into detail, or very little. I'm weird like that, even though I'm NOT like that.

this is truly a wonderful fic.

i love the way you wrote this... and for once someone shows the true passion trapped inside Elphaba through more than just sex.

I mean, a lot of times people allude to the passion within her, but that part that she's beating the hellfire out of baraq really shows just how much intensity is inside her character. Most writers tend to miss that, at least in my limited experience with Wicked fiction.

This was a really great fiction, I like it alot.

Excellent story. I loved it. I am about to go read the sequel! I'm excited!

Well, I just read this entire story in one night. It was fascinating! I've never really enjoyed the Gelphie pairing until I read this story! Well done, friend! Very well done!

good story i liked it!

I think this was the first Wicked fic I read, a LONG while back, and I just rediscovered it. It kept me interested. Thanks for capturing my attention with an action fic!

This was an exceptionally well written and beautiful fan fiction. I want to say that this is most definitely one of the best Gelphie stories I have read. I really hope you write more!

I can't wait to start to read the sequel!

Also may I add that I am jealous to an extreme amount that you saw IDINA MENZEL in London. I am simply turning *green* with envy.

I loved it! really well written. I had tears in my eyes in the end. I'm so glad you wrote a sequel. Anyways keep up the great work!

oh no i'm so sad!

I hate Baraq!

i liked the part where Elphaba talks about having Dorothy and the hourglass.

On to the next chapter i'm really excited to read it!

So i love, love, love the way you write these two! I was reading the second story you wrote for this and it was pretty good so i thought i should read the first to get a better understanding of things.

And i'm pretty sure i love it! I'm only on the 7th chapter and have to take a break until tomorrow (cuz it's late) I can't wait for tomorrow so i can read the rest of the story! Get ready for 3 more reviews!

Amazing Job!