Okay, so, first of all, I have submitted maybe three reviews in all my years of frequenting and probably I've never bothered to log in to do it. For you, however, I (grumblingly) bothered.

This is a very well written piece, both in style and content. The emotional and physical subject matter is written beautifully and powerfully, and I think you stayed true to the characters fairly damn well within the framework you chose. I bought it. Fantastic. It's stirring. Please continue writing.

I have read both your stories, and I have to say, you are one hell of a writer. I'm sure you must know, because you are too good not to. You must have published. If not, you should. Everything I have read about what makes a good writer, you are doing. The detail and moment-by-moment descriptions were what struck me first, no wasted words . . . on and on. You are far and away one the best, probably one of the top three writers here, in my opinion.

Ack! You had to leave it there? No fair! I want more!

Thanks,

Marilyn