This is one of the worst stories I've ever attempted to read. I've never written a flame as a review before but believe when I say this story is what inspired me to write my first, and hopefully only, one. Your main character is such a simpering idiot, I mean god she's worse than Sakura and Hinata combined. Allegedly she's more intelligent than Sakura and so great, but she has no confidence or friends because...? It's never explained. People apparently just hate her. At least Naruto has having a demon inside him as an excuse. What dumbass just takes a list from a teenage boy and does his shopping for him? Not to mention, Shikamaru was always portrayed as being lazy but kind. Why would he make some random girl do his shopping for him? Your story's plot is terrible, the characters are god awful, and you should probably just delete this heinous excuse of a story. Seriously. It's terrible.

it's been so long but pleasee updatee! one of the best fanfics i've read except for the time skip that i was unaware of i don't remember reading about Yuri being hospitalized yet it was mentioned further into the story slightly confusing me but still love the storyline!

is this story going to remain forever unfinished? TT

I don't think Mamoru means earth... In Japanese, 地球, chikyuu means planet earth while 土, tsuchi means dirt(earth)

Please continue I really like this fic. I love Yuri's character I love her personality also I want to know what happens next please try and write some more! :D

Pleeeeeaaaseee update!

I love this! Read all of it in one go LOL, couldn't put it down (I'm on my iPod)! So please update!

oh dammit

update soon

roaw.

update.

KiMu~

SaKi~

eh

am i low or is this story missing 2 chapters?

plz add them back on if u can~~

cuz ch 12 and ch13 dont fit with each other~~

and i wanna read it correctly... and i hardly get anything if tht personality goes off so quickly.

thx~~

KiMu~

SaKi~

Willow has been misinformed, hasn't he...

i reall enjoy your story! just wondering though... did you by any chance delete something between chapters... i think they were 12 and 13? i can tell it's now shippuden haha. uhmm so just to get this straight, Yuri was told by Sakura that Shikamaru and Temari were dating and so she and Naruto started going out.. then she moves out of the Nara's to live with her long lost brother? and Kiba wants to set up Hinata and Naruto? yeah.. ok that makes sense actually... why am i even asking... huh. :) kay on with the story then!

This is really really good! :)

*frowns* whats going on? how come it sundly skips so much? i know you said your redoing it but i just wanted to know if you where still going to. i only read a little bit of this but i can tell it like years later.

That's ur update? Lame. And I was looking forward to it too.

this was pritty good :) although some of it reminded me of your gaara story which im sorry to say i didnt like all to much i perfer when gaara is way out of carecter and is nice i know it ooc anyway let me know when the nexts ones out :)

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!

I hate when people take a long time to update. I understand why, but I'm impatient. XD

Anyways, love the story. Please continue it. _