Wish you would write more

Next chapter now

XD I love the condescending, "Dora The Explorer"-parody-esque voice that "The Imperfect Drug" is written in. Just love it. And the name "Lessangryide"? Genius. And that final conclusion is simply awesome, though, truth be told, the reason that I find it so hilarious is because I was really expecting a long, drawn-out kind of thing, and instead it simply ended. Great work, and, even if you don't return to fanfiction, good luck with whatever interests you choose to pursue!

I think the only bigger ending than that might've involved a firecracker.

Lolz.

...Yep, I have to agree with you, I'm really glad the ice tea they already drank didn't get sucked into the vortex. That "reverse the leak" idea is pretty clever, too; and, I agree, duct tape DOES fix EVERYTHING, even rifts in time and space.

Total awesomness. Aside from a few big words I didn't understand, it was a really good read. Very glad to see you haven't dropped it!

"Don't tell her—she might crack." Was that from the one with the opera singer, where she was talking about how "stupid" cartoons are? Or am I mixing references here? (Dangit, I need to watch volume 3 again...thankfully winter break's coming up soon.)

I absolutely LOVE the chapter title, even though it took me way too long to get it. I have to say, though, my *absolute* favorite part was the iced tea. It just made me burst out laughing—you could chuck it at Xakko, but instead you start to chug it. And Carley saves some "for later consumption". XD "Now, THAT'S comedy!"

Geez, and with that chapter title, here I was afraid it was gonna be gory XD

I've got to draw that rubber duck. Because the duck's just damn hilarious. And...well, nevermind, I'll tell you that later ;) Can't spoil all my lovely ideas...

As I said in MSN, this was probably the best line: Xakko’s muffled voice could be heard through the plunger: “oh, gross! This plunger damn well better have not been used before!”

I really hope you're not planning to wait too long, or I'm going to be very sad D:

"Ryan and Carley entered the house and headed to the room that contained the Personality Transdimensionalizer Implantation Device, lots of computers, many flasks with randomly-coloured boiling liquids, body parts floating in formaldehyde, and a Jacob’s Ladder just because they’re cool."-Lol, I never thought about how cool all of that stuff must look. I don't know what a Jacob's Ladder is either, but I may look it up...or just look stupid and wait for you to tell me :P

"“Boy, are we glad to see you!” said Ryan, beginning to walk towards the portal. “It sure would be great to have a helping hand with the situation here…”

At this time, Carley flipped the light switch, and it was revealed that the angle and poor lighting had lead to an eye trick after all, one that made them incorrectly identify the arriving toon as Yakko."-Me: O_. ...uh-oh...

I'm really hoping you're not going to keep us waiting too long, since you won't even be nice and give me a preview D': ((tilt your head to the right to see that, it's a sad crying face :P But I bet you knew that, which makes that and this sentence very redundant even though I'm still typing for no apparent reason.))

Sorry I don't have a better review for you...my mind's kinda elsewhere today (like on the homework I never even started yet?). I won't ask you for a preview next time so I can give you a good review!

-C

P.S. I finally added this to my favs on my new account :P and you too!

YAY, AN UPDATE! (I actually had to go and reread some of the previous chapters to remember what was going on...how sad is that?) The portal bit reminds me of "The Burbank Confession" by KitchenSink (if you haven't read it yet, YOU MUST)...I wish your updates were longer, you're a really good author and I feel deprived for having to wait multiple months for only a few pages...then again, I have all of your fanfics saved on my hard drive and can read them anytime, so I shouldn't complain. ,

Um...what's a Jacob's Ladder?

Yay! Thanks for the update and Happy Birthday!

Uh-oh... that can't be good... Xakko in the real world? Nu! Ofcorse, ANY toon in the real world would be bad; in the toon world, when you drop an anvil on someone's head, it's funny and convenient. In the real world, however, it's just messy and concidered murder.

OMG! Laughing here! Hallarious! Dude! I can't believe it took me two times reading this chapter to figure out who in the heck you inserted into the chapter! Once was like who knows how many months ago, and the next when I was bored (just now) googled my username and found Carely's review of the chapter. Yes, I'm that slow!

You know, intresting fact here: I'm actually a hemophobic, I really hate blood. But I like the number 15... x3 Thanks for mentioning me, and because I don't think I've ever sent you a review I want you to know I like this story- if I have then I don't mind saying it again. :)

I realize that I should be lucky to get any sort of update on this story, but the endless authors' notes and skimming over in the previous chapter got kind of tedious/aggravating/you get the picture. (And you probably planned it that way too...) Then again, everything in "the real world" is turning plot holes, so I guess it fits in, but it was still pretty annoying. I liked that bit with Elmer Fudd and Bambi's mom, though...it reminded me of an "Over the Hedge" comic strip where Vern was insisting that Goofy was the gunman, since only he could have made the bullet zig-zag around various shrubbery in the line of fire.

No! Bumbie's mom is... is... wah! ;_;

Hehe great to see you writing again... love where this is going (someplace!)!

I'm glad you couldn't wait a week! :P

*cringes* owie...IV and catheter disconnecting sounds extremely painful...

Lol, I love all the plot holes...that one with the basket would be a great pic, if I was more inspired than a stone...

"did we just see Elmer Fudd shoot Bambi's Mom?" XD I thought you would've said Bumbi's Mom, but I still love the random appearance of Slappy and Skippy-I get the reference!