XD this is wonderful!

Quite an interesting writer! Great incorporation of story characters with weird insane crazy metaphysical and other spiritual worldly! The allusion painted in this particular story lends great dramatic affect vividly across the minds eye for certain!

I don't ever review every chapter because it tends to take away from the entirety of ones story(as long as said story is a completed version). Rather I review at the end and include everything as a whole! And I have to say, this adaption is one of the better depictions of beloved story character I've ever read.

Believe me dearie I do tell you; I've read a lot of Pirates' on this site.

Well rounded and flowed very well with sinuous context and sub-context connection alike. Props to you and my hats off! ) ** Jenna

P.s. Don't be so hard on those who don't review, they just don't know what they're missin' mate! Savvy!? . . . pm if you like, curious if you have other stories...

Wow, that was pretty good. I liked that you made Sao Feng to be some kind of demon. It was really interesting. :)

This is...interesting.

I have to be honest, I didn't really find the communication between Tia Dalma and Elizabeth very realistic. It all seemed really forced and they seemed out of character

Even so, this is only the first chapter, so I egearly move on to chapter two...

HoistTheColours

omg! that was good! i loved the ending, very cute.

I love it it flows very well and keeps me in my me want to keep reading and I will on to the sequel. Hats off to you

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YES! THIS IS WHAT I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR! NOW THE PLOT GETS INTERESTING! :] Yeah! I really do love Seo Fang! :]

OMG ! that was so amazing ! i love your stories ! they are AMAZING! you had me crying when elizabeth and Jack died ! you are the ONLY one that has made me cry and then smile at the end ! the two of the thre BEST things you can do in the world! it takes real talent to think like that and then put it on paper, well in this case vitual paper, but still! OMG I CAN'T GET OVER THIS STORY!

Awwh! it was sad, cheery, funny. i swear i had tears in my eyes when Elizabeth died, and that Jack had to die later. ksdjskdjs. regardless, i really do love the story.

“I’ve thought about it. And…I still want to kill him. Can I please kill him? I’d really like to kill him. Just once. I’ll never do it again, I swear.”

i think that made me giggle most out of the whole story. i had to cover my mouth so i didn't wake anyone. since it's like.. almost 4am.

the end confuses me though.

“I do hear it, Elizabeth,” he said, his voice calm and pleasant. And he said, just before he pressed his lips to mine again: “It’s the end of what we knew.”

did they both die, or is he back for good?

yes. i'm a little stupid at times.

-adds to favorites-

e. so long great wonderful story!

oh my gosh that is such an emotional chapter (sniff..)

good, I'm running out of things to say

this is a very good story and you match all the characters with their persinality perfectly

it is a wonderful story so much action romance it is just the best

I do feel kind of bad for will but you know i think Jack needs a woman more than Will does

what you said about the warm and fuzzyness at the, this chapter makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside