| Reviews for Cold Case |
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DazzlingClouds chapter 1 . 4/30/2014 I really enjoyed this story, it flowed well and showed a lot of tension and suspense. The interrogations and the diary entries were nicely written, I really like how you used them to unfold the story :) Poor Sora though. Still, I'm glad that they all reunited in the end and Daisuke got caught. Good job once again! |
no one important chapter 1 . 1/14/2011 this is beautiful. truly magificent. it's done in complete format of a cold case episode and i applaud you for this :D thew storyline, the mystery, the drama- it's all hands down amazing. |
emichii chapter 1 . 12/13/2006 i was only reading this becuase i told my friend to read worlds apart becuase i reckon its the best story and she accidently clicked this story and told me it was cool so i had to read it! anyway it was really good. funny plot i guess but you can really respect how tai is just so sweet u can tell from his diary. anyway it was awesome! |
LaurynHill chapter 1 . 7/15/2006 I must agree with the other reviewers on one part: the ending was a little rushed. But otherwise, I really enjoyed reading this story. You only used whilst 5 times too! You've really scaled that down over time! Lol. This was another one of your good fics, and I eagerly wait for more. :) |
Marie Darkholme chapter 1 . 7/15/2006 So...well, I prefer Taichi alive, but well...I think you wouldn't have lost anything in making it a little bigger, in chapters...but it was pretty good. The description of how things happened and all. My only critic is that I thought that, for a re-opened case, it solved rather quickly. But I understand the idea of making it short. So, from 1 to 20, I'll have to classify as 18, which is pretty good in the category of short fanfics. You were great as always. |
BladeMasterAd chapter 1 . 7/15/2006 Wow. That was a really good story. The ending was a bit rushed it felt, but the writing style was excellent. Another excellent fic. *2 thumbs up. |
S.A.Blossom chapter 1 . 7/15/2006 I know I absolutely HATE stories with sad endings but I actually loved this one. keep up the good work, you are a very talented writer. |
spong chapter 1 . 7/15/2006 wow! that was...wow... I think that'll have to be my second favourite story that you've written...very well written. You're improving with each story and you had started out fantastic anyway! The ending was a bit quick, but the start and body was amazing...great work bob! |
AngelSachiya chapter 1 . 7/14/2006 Wow that was really good. Sad but good. Nice detective work too. |