What the heck! This upset me and I am very sorry for hating on it. I just, I love shippo and I think He would look cute with kagome as they slowly fell in love

Ah I faved it but didn't review it! How mean of me XD Yes Shippo died in the end (sad face) but the overall concept was halariouse(I can't spell that word XD) and I couldn't stop laughing! Kagome was...well Kagome...I can't say anything about her! She was snooty but it was awsome that someone did her like that. You usually see her as kind and sweet! It was very original, very...sweet (lol), unexpected and totally funny and I enjoyed it very much XD (I love Kag/Ship story's so sue me ~_)

sick very sick, not that i like inuyasha but really? to go that far is just sick lol. Good job btw short and sweet.-Stephen

You sick twisted monster!.how could you do that to shippo?...or inuyasha? i now slap you with a wet noodle!

Hey! Awesome story. Another masterpiece from you, eh? Good job. It was really funny. Truly hilarious. I just read it on here quite a few times in a row.

It never fails to make me laugh, no matter how many times I read it! Please, keep writing stories!

that was...unexpected...

here's what I think: I think that you should separate the paragraph more, just so it's not bunched together. And this IS romance and humor but it's more of parody than romance. And your ideas are obviously very original, so keep it up! I know you'll improve.