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Too bad this doesn't look like its getting continued. I thought it was pretty good, the writing style was nice.

No matter how overdone and formulaic it is, I love couples that start of hating each other and slowly start to open up.

Even before what Lola said to Popo, she did slightly annoy me. The way she rushed to Young Link's defense every time there was a prank just.. ugh. But I wouldn't say that I hated her.

MMMMMM... ANGST. MY FAVORITE. still disappointed this fic may or may not be dead.

Aww. It's been a year since you updated :/

This story was very interesting. So far, I find the pairing of Young Link (rather... Toon Link now) and Nana very cute. Lola and Popo would've been cute, if Lola hadn't screwed up with her words.
I liked the idea of Young Link changing into Toon Link. Tho, it must've been harsh for him since he forgot his old past, he actually has a family. Plus, he's still adorable. c:

Hmm... Lola. To me, she seems a bit like a brat. I wonder how Nana could still be her friend for so long. I'm kinda happy that Nana (for now) left Lola. But at the same time, it seems quite heart breaking.
And I tried to take that OC test you referred to earlier. For some reason, I got a high score x.x Hmm... I don't really make my OCs too superior nor too angsty. Hmm

Anyways, I hope you continue this soon! c: Sad to see a good story go to waste, y'know? Plus, I wanna see Young/Toon Link go out with Nana x3

Hmm, I was expecting a lot more arguing and yelling from Nana; I mean Young Link made her life Hell and Lola lied to her about dating Young Link. I think Nana forgave the both of them way to easy.

I love this!

Like most of the other fanfics I read this won really dragged on and I don't care if I'm leaving on the second last chapter

Ruto... Not good...

This... this is still alive. O_O

I'm on a phone, so no super in-depth analysis of your grammar and story structure, but I just have to say, almost 7 years...

I reread the whole thing and came back here to still remark how underrated this is. It's creative and it's you, completely original. This will be a review of chapters 17-19, since that is where I left off.

When I was back at chapter one I remembered how much of a brat Young Link was and after reading chapter 17 and 18, I almost wanted to cry for him. You executed his tragic transformation (which may turn out to be good in the end) so nicely. It really pulled at my heart strings. It is so sad that he's lost a part of his old self, and it looks like it's fading more and more each day. The moment with his older self was sad first, but then so touching when Link says he will continue to love him regardless of their lost connection. Though let's be real, I don't think they could ever lose their connection. They've bonded. They're here for each other for life, and I think that's what Link really was trying to get into his head. (Link has become one of my favorite secondary characters in this story. Nana and Y. Link constantly tries to push him away, but he stays there and always knows the right things to say) They do have his back. But back to transformation: that was actually pretty crafty of you. I didn't know what to think when he had black irises when I reviewed this a long while ago. I was surprised to find him changing into Toon Link. What a twist, seriously.

As for Miss Nana. She still frustrates me, and I can see where her frustrations come from. But she had her shining moment when she realized (after calling Zelda an idiot, which I totally agree with and did the sassy girl snap when she aired out that silly princess) Young Link was indeed a friend. (BTW, there was a typo there. I believe you meant to say "Link was a friend" but "a" was left out if I recall. Since it's an important realization, I wanted to make sure to let you know about it) I thought "awww" there is some hope for these two after all. Then she knocks the dude down, man oh man, temper, Nana. Haha, I love it. She'll get it right one day I guess. In her defense, little Link wasn't really helping the situation either.

Yup, they're both just frustrated. Sheesh, they should just make out already. xD

And I like the smooth integrating of the Brawl Era in this story. It's not at all like you're just slapping them in there like throwing paint at canvas. It's nice and smooth like a brush stroke! Another plus!

And heck no, Nana isn't harsh enough on Lola. Okay, that's not true. Still, Lola deserved that completely. Popo does not fit your league? Well, update your Cosmo, chica! The guy for you, who understands your faults, has been there all this time, and you're too scared to accept it. I think she's just hesitant, but even so, she needed to censor herself, especially in the presence of his sister. Anyhoo, I hope nothing bad happens. Bad things tend to happen when Nana and Lola start to fight.

Now that I am at the end, I wonder if the Masquerade Ball will save everyone? Can we trust in the ball that we have been told is stupid by Nana and Young Link, to bring out the best in everybody? Mmm...I'm thinking it can. *puts on Edward Cullen mask* We shall see at the ball! *sings in best opera voice*

Haha, but seriously. I forgot how much I liked this and I'm glad I read it again from the beginning. It's fun to see writing transform from what it started as to something totally different in a great way. I'm back on the game with this story and I'll be here to the end (I read your profile about your goodbye). I plan to be here to cheer at the finish line for your fantastic accomplishments! Best wishes on upcoming chapters!

Much love,

RK

Ah, a fine chapter. I enjoyed it lots. :)

Kinda disappointed to see that falling out between Lola and Nana at the end. Hope they resolve that, along with Lola getting a grip on her feelings for Popo. I suppose I'll have to wait for that, though, huh?

Amazing job, crystal. Sorry I haven't reviewed in such a long time. I shall be prompt for next chapter. Promise. ;)

Much love, hun.

-Sage

This is addictive. I like how the character's are all woven together like a cloth. Their relationships get pulled and tugged and they are yet they are all still connected to each other.

Yes, Piridi! Bring on the Piridi! Anyway, it'd be nice to see a little more interaction between Toon Link and Aryll, but I guess that can wait for the next chapter.

Yay, you updated! I was looking around and saw that you had updated and had to wait 5 minutes before I read it. I was too busy laughing (you updated, which had me relieved, because I was starting to think that you'd abandoned this story) and way too busy being excited to even click on the new chapter. I love the story. This fits the characterization of them in my mind perfectly. Great job on another chapter! I wonder what's going to happen next...

please write more! It's an awesome story! I really want to read what happens next...I love cliffhangers!