You said that the black horse was a girl right? You also said it was a stallion. A stallion is an adult MALE horse. I was also wondering if you would add more chapters not just leave it hanging like that.

i like this one! any good fanfic about PopurixJack is good in my book! i hope you conitinue this!

great chapter. Whats MP? oh, a cliffhanger! i hope the next update comes soon! yay

Rock and Popuri's meeting... what the heck?

There's no way she's gonna make the same mistake twice... is she?

Yup. This has gotten interesting, but now I wonder if Popuri and Celia are gonna have a personal talk about this...

Hm... Jack, Rock, and Celia... why do I have an interesting feeling about this childhood story?

The whole water thing with Rock was pretty rich...

-“If he drowns, I’m not saving him,” Jack chuckled as he lent back on the raft, soaking up the Suns rays on the fine day.

Heh... Rock sounded like a pretty big jerk... go Jack!

cool chapter! it's good to know more of the back story. update soon!

YES! MY PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ANSWERED!

And so the Popuri Goodness comences...

Interesting love scene, by the way.

(I REALLY enjoy this take on Popuri...)

great chapter, but i am a little confused. Whats the deal with the necklace thing?

other than that, it was great! update soon!

I haven't seen this story before and I am glad that you updated it, cause I like it.

I've already read these chapters on HMA, and I'll say what I think again.

All of the chapters are very well done. :)

Wow, that's the most adventerous side of Popuri I've ever seen! Awesome! I don't see Popuri fanfiction too often, and I'm overjoyed whenever I get to see quality ones like this! I'm going to stay aboard!

How beautiful! Is Jack going to fall in love with Popuri? They make a great couple, somewhat weird, but cute! PLease, do keep on. I do not see any major flaw in this story, so congratulations.

Nirak.

wow, i really like this fan fic, there certainly plenty of action. Whats with the man she was chasing. Interesting, very interesting. I'm looking forward to more.

Wow, this is a really good story. You should keep on!

Love it! Keep it up! And dont let the lack of reviews stop you either! :)

Goofers