Awesome! Would definitely read again! Write more! I love your imaginative mindset!

It seems to be good, but as an author you must know how annoying it is to read a story you like but with so many spelling mistakes.

Ok I'm done. Stupid story. Never made sense from the beginning.

Wonderful story.. thanks for sharing..

cool

:3 really enjoyed reading your story looking forward to reading more in the future

I believe that the Muggle Studies teacher was Charity Burbage, but I'm not *completely* solid on that. Many stories have used the name as the muggle studies teacher, but that might be mere propagation of an incorrect name.

Entertaining so far, but you don't really explain why Sirius is suddenly no longer a criminal.

I really loved this story. It was great to read, and was well developed.

Keep writing! :)

Even I can tell from here that you have an excellent plot. The spelling and grammar, however, leave much to be desired, but it's not to difficult to check over and correct it. All in all, I look forward to finishing this despite errors. After all, not everything can be perfection ;)

chapters are a bit short but your being to hard on yourself.I think you are a little low on details not sure how to explain what i mean by that other than that I think its okay to kinda good so far not bad at all\

thank you

Simply amazing... perfect mix of description, action, and dialogue.

Continue writing...

I loved it. Great job!

This story had some great...stuff...what's the word? The pint is tho that I LOVE it!

WoW... I actually enjoyed this much more than the Deathly Hallows. You're ideas were extremely interesting and the story was full of surprises!

A great read!