| Reviews for Paradise Kisses |
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unheardcries chapter 4 . 4/28/2015 wow been a while |
KiraK.chan chapter 4 . 4/21/2015 Oh snapppppp I didn't know what I was gonna get with this story but the plot is surprisingly alright! I think you needed to write in more detail, and make more of those spaces where you know the scene changes? Otherwise the story is flying all over the place and seems not well structured? Good thing is it is still understandable! |
Shadow Kitsune67 chapter 4 . 4/20/2015 . . .poor Naru. D: Ino's parents are assholes D8. Looking forward to reading more! |
animeloveryugioh chapter 3 . 8/11/2014 Please continue I love this so much |
PikachuGirlXx chapter 3 . 12/23/2012 I want you to continue! But This was made so long ago! This poor, forgotten, amazing, story! |
Mana-sensei chapter 3 . 11/25/2012 More please |
Sam chapter 3 . 6/2/2012 When Are U Going To Make A 4th |
sad1st1c m1stress chapter 3 . 5/25/2012 More |
andysanime chapter 3 . 3/23/2012 Really good job on this story so far, I hope you update... some time. |
Anonymous chapter 3 . 2/5/2012 ~Don't have an account~ This is amazing so far! Hope you update soon :) Um..I don't have any constructive criticism or anything since I'm not exactly a very good author/writer/thing. Just keep going with what you've been doing so far! :D |
MyLiloITAChIassasin chapter 3 . 1/21/2012 hahahah... man naruto got alot of dudes after his ass. |
Evil E. Evil chapter 3 . 7/2/2011 this is a good story you should update and finish |
ChiKazex chapter 3 . 2/7/2011 Awesome story. I love everyone's character in there- it's awesome. I can't decide between Sasuke, Gaara or Neji. ~ |
AkakoChiYuki chapter 3 . 9/28/2009 I really like the plot of this story. Please don't abandon it. I'll be waiting for the next update. D |
G-C-W chapter 3 . 4/9/2009 please find the insparation to continue writing this- it would be such a shame to let a great fic go to waste |