Beautiful:)

I love your writing! Awesome idea and I love the flow and the ending!

Whoa, your writing voice is amazing

This is so beautiful. I'm in love with the imagery you create; it's really inspiring. I've actually had this story bookmarked for quite some time: I didn't have an account on FFnet until recently, so now it's going to my favorites. _

bittersweet.

You wrote this so beautifully and elegantly that I had to read it a second time after finishing. The idea itself leaves a hole in the readers' hearts, but gosh, one just couldn't help but love the subtle hints that leaves a feeling of hope. Absolutely wonderfully written. (:

that's me

ahhelga

aka Pauline

one word...WOW! it was just magical all in all. Sad, yet in a nice way. You have somehow captured there innocent and pure like love that had hooked me to these two in the first place. it's very good, really is.

Thanx!

Obviously one of the better written pieces in this fandom. Absolutely lovely and very well-written. It's definitely going on my favourites list.

Very nice indeed. Thank you for posting.

Hmm, I like it's dream-like quality. It would have been nice to see what happens when they finally DO see each other.

*Aqua Blue

Well done.

What can I say? Anything I say is not going to be better than this story.

It doesn't have a complicated, twisted storyline, or a heart-wrenching tale, just words weaving their own magic.

I love you for this.

Ahem -clears throat-

“Share from your heart. And your story will touch and heal people's souls.”

(A slightly butchered quote from Melody Beattie)

In an area of the site plagued by the worst repetitive plot lines I've ever had the disgrace to read, you, my dear, shine bright. A shame that you haven't written anything else for Spirited Away as it could use you! I think my favorite thing about this ficlet is the Steven King-esque thoughts set into the narrative.

Yes, this is definitely going on my favorites.

Kudos

Pingpong~

Favoriting someone without leaving a review makes me feel guilty, especially since reviews are rather hard to come by on this site. Anyways, onto the actual writing:

Honestly, this is probably the best Spirited Away fanfiction I've read thus far in the fandom [never mind the fact that I haven't read much in the fandom]. Well-crafted with a great atmosphere [love how you left out the names]. The parenthetical comments and the imagery; the story's an instant win.

That being said, some of your sentences are awkwardly constructed, most notably the second sentence: the clause separated off by the hyphens completely destroys the flow, and I really fail to see the point of the clause anyways. Nevertheless, it's great once I get past those first two lines.

-Temeraire

That was so sweet and heartbreaking it hurts. *loves*