So he’s training with a sword, to kill, and is damn good at it. Then in a fight all he uses is non petal spells? Fucking seriously ?

This was a very sweet story, very well done.
I'll add it to my favorites.

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I love this story! I know many people hate OC but you made me love Anabelle. At times, I forget she is not canon so I can safely say you are a wonderful author to pull of such a move and even make the of a main character. Would you ever consider making a sequel?
Thanks a bunch hun for sharing this gem with the rest of the world. I love it and from reading through the reviews, I know I am not the only one to share this sentiment. Keep on writing (and sharing it with us)!

I think I’m a little more then a little in love with this story. Seriously, I’m crying. This turned me into a sobbing blubbering mess, and I love it. Gosh I want more, they are so sweet together it hurts

Their names were Amycus and Alecto - Carrow siblings.

It's been nearly 4 years since I found this story, And even after memorising how each chapter pans outI still find myself reading every chapter with the same burning enthusiasm and curiousity as I did first when I started this. This is always my all time favorite and something I truly adore from the bottom of my heart. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful and brilliant story with us.

They should have taken her the Infirmary immediately especially if she is barely hanging on! This lapse of time could cost her life!

I love love and a billion times love this story! Thank you for sharing this..I will definitely come back time after time to reread this magnificent and thoughtful fic you have here. Congratulations and I hope you write more stories on Harry Potter because we need writers like you.

Wait, Andromeda as in Andromeda Black?

I love this story !.would you .making a sequel to this with the Deadly Hallows so we can have and Ana and Harry have .ending with each other?
Thank you for sharing and posting this!

That was incredibly cute, thank you.

Just enough action and drama to keep the plot going without getting super angsty.

This was excellent, thank you for writing it. Do you intend a sequel at any point? There's room for one, but it wasn't clearly set up.

Despite being confused about the overall timeline this is a good read so far.

I like the characters, Sirius in particular is amusing, and it's overall just delightfully fluffy and cute.

I realized I'd just been complaining and asking questions in all my reviews so I wanted to mention the positives too.

I'm still very confused about the timeline. Things just don't really add up.

The main point of confusion is that this *seems* to be right before fourth year, and the Triwizard Tournament. But for some reason Harry knows the prophecy, and the Order Of The Phoenix is active.

I re- checked and read the A/N where you mentioned Dumbles and Sirius not being dead, but that honestly just raises more questions. Because mentioning Dumbledore not dying is either a spoiler, or this is set in book seven. If it is book seven, then that order meeting is slightly unreasonable. Voldemort is alive by then, surely a meeting of the only major resistance to Voldy would comprise far more than a single topic. They're basically organizing a war front.

In the novels there was a brother and sister with the last name Carrow. The brother was Amycus, and the sister was Alecto. They taught at Hogwarts when it was Death Eater controlled. So it's interesting that you sorta erased one of them (or at least haven't mentioned them), but that you genderbent the remaining one.

Which I'm not criticizing- if I wanted to read straight canon I'd read the books.

This is decently written, though slightly confusing. Like, what year is it? I thought that by the time Harry knew about the prophecy Sirius was dead. Or did I miss an explanation somewhere?

This was an awesome,awesome story, very well thought n written. Kudos

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