This was really well written. I love it!

What a fantastic read. I love how you ended the story to go back to the beginning of Bleach, and it's just so symbolic that after all recollection of the Shinigami's death, one stood out in a positive note that brings hope. Good choice of cast as well!

This is by far one of my favorite Bleach fics

Every paragraphed number ends with a powerful sentence. It keeps me reading 'til I was left hoping for another set of characters just to know your insight of their deaths, which actually made perfect sense to some timelines in Bleach. The Rukia/Hisana death was the most plausible event that may had happened in the Bleachverse since it ties up to the 1855 Great Ansai earthquake that killed 7,000 people. Kinda coincidence that Ichigo was 15 years old when he first met Rukai (I read a good theory about this one on Tumblr).

Kudos to your choice of cast.

Oh, I got that last one, you're implying that Ichigo's Kaien's reincarnation. I really liked this fic, nicely written.

Wow. Kinda sad. Renji's got to me the most. :'(

Amazing story, very well done.

I think that made me cry some actual tears. Kudos.

Nice...well, as nice as a fic on death can be. I like it

This was great. Really makes you think about how it happened...

Very deep piece. I like it.

Isn't it ironice how Hitsuguya died in fire, and Hinamori died in water? I mean, they're really close, and their powers are fire and water/ice. Just think. If they hadn't died when they did, they might not have met eachother. So technically, in being killed by the element they were, they were brought closer to the person who controlled said element. Does that make any sense? I dunno. I just thought it was kind of cool.

I expected you to stereotype Mayuri's death to poison or experimenting like most others, but you didn't.

Gunpowder. A truly amazing idea. I would have never thought of that. Great job.

I have always wondered how these characters died. Having their deaths shape their personalities and their powers was really cool and very though evoking, unfortunately now I cant stop wondering how I;m going to die and I have to keep reminding myself that renji is not going to swoop down upon my death and carry me off to the soul society.

...wow...that was fantastic!