Reviews for When You give Charlie a Number
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2015
I can't stop laughing. Gr8 job
Cutter12 chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
A cute, little story. Thanks for writing it. :)
zookitty chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
hahahahhahahahaha ohmigosh! If you give a mouse a cookie Numb3rs style! I love it. Very creative...and adorable! Well done

-Chris
AnomolyInPi-Minor chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
just one word: great. thumbs up and cookies for you.
KrasnayaSquare chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
I read this once a while ago, but I didn't review it. So I am now going to remedy that. I love this. Period. It is absolutely hilarious to me and it certainly brightened my day. Thank you!

Ja ne!

NinjaAlchemist
An-Jelly-Ca chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
OMG! I may just die laughing! That was so funny n so true! And I love his hair 2!
Sushi Chi chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
I liked this story a lot. Very amusing.
Charlie's Angel 3890 chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
lols
ladybrin chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
cute and funny- kind of like" if you give a mouse a cookie-haha
Alice I chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
I passed by that title a couple of times and of course thought of the mouse and the cookie. I read "If you give a mouse a cookie" to my 6 yr. old this evening and when I passed by this title again I opened it up and was not dissapointed.

Cute, now can you do Suess?
pucktofaerie chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
Okay, this is...weird. But I understand if it was an early morning/late night piece. THose have a tendency to be weird. So...keep up the great work, and keep writing. Keep obeying your muses-cause they rule the world!
The Silent Rumble chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
That was so funny! I caught a couple mistakes, but it's so true...

P.S. I think someone's read 'if you give a mouse a cookie' a few too many times...
atrum infractus chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
That was cute! The third person is really nice here. It's like a shot into poor Don's world. Which must really suck.
tkdblack chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
The title sucked me in and it was a cute story idea. It could use a little polishing though. Some parts made sense and some just didn't. It was, however, fun to read.
BeckyS chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
A nice story, very cute. A good Numb3rs take-off on the published children's story "If You Give a Mouse a Cookie" by Laura Numeroff, which you should credit as inspiration. Hope you keep writing! Becky
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