Loved it. Please update.

I like it

Just found this story and I really love it. I just hope that there's a sequel for this. I mean, when Haley, Lucas and Peyton return from their trips.

Eightieth Review! Wo! xD

Right - review.

So, I think it's interesting. The story was well-written, and points by both sides were very good. In the final chapter, I was yelling out for Brooke to give in and for them to get back together. But then Brooke listed all she would lose, and... and it was all so sadly true! I felt so horrible for her, and partly Nathan as well. But Nathan seemed to think it was worth it, didn't he?

I loved the part where Brooke said she could love him and Nathan asked her to repeat, and so on. So sweet!haha

I liked your ending in the way that it was unqiue and not terribly cliche'd. It was very different in that they both only had one night left, before they returned to what they were before. There wasn't some epic ending with everything coming together. I did love that. I thought Brooke's bit at the end was very bittersweet, too. 'Specially the last line.

I do have one critique; it seemed rushed. Suddenly, Nathan can't keep his hands off of her? I mean, where did THAT come from? I would find it more believable if you gave a lead up to it, or made them completely smashed. But anyway. I did like it.

I'm not going to read the sequal, simply b/c I don't know if it's complete and you update and because I'm not in the mood to see Brooke get crushed and Lucas and her fight :( lol.

But it was a good story, and you're good at writing!

xCNx

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I swear, it was fate that I stumbled upon this fic!haha. Well, not fate, 'cause I'm not really sure if I believe in it, but it's definitely a coincidence!lol. I was searching and searching for A GOOD, WELL-WRITTEN fic with Nathan and Brooke, and I found this then! Brilliant!

Your grammar is perfect in this chapter, which had a huge grin on myself in itself. It is so hard to find fics with those two and it's well-written. I'm hoping with all my heart that it turns out to be a Brathan, but I guess I'll settle either way. Sigh.

At least it's Brooke and Nathan. :)

The set-up was nice, and I loved their little competition to see who had the worst story. And Brooke's bluntness is so Brooke, but funny also. Sad for Nathan, I guess.

This promises to be a good fic so far, and I will review upon reading the final chapter with a real review! This one is more of an excited filled rant.

Thank you!haha

xCNx

awsome! i totally love this story more and more! i love brathan! i cant wait to read more! this story is just so amazing! you did an awsome job ! you should be very very proud! i hope you continue! alos hope you update soon!

awsome! i love this story! i cant wait to read the next chapter! hope it comes soon! this story is just so awsome!

awsome! i love bratan together! i cant wait for you to put sequeal!

love it! i love brathan! i hope you continue

totally love it! awsome! i love brathan !

theres on words to i can say that sum up how awsome! this story is!

all i can say is awsome!

awsome! totally love this story! i love brathan!

awsome! gr8 story

aw so cute:P I always wondered what brathan would be like...it's weird cause I love nayley, but brooke and nathan would just fit so much! Good story, I'm impressed...