Literally one of my favorite potc stories ever. I love how you kept both Jack and Elizabeth in character. I feel silly posting this review so long after the last person, but just wanted you to know that your story has stayed with me - I've reread it a bunch of times since found it in an old c2. Thank you for posting!

awesome! love it!

Wow. A splendid story idea, and fantastic writing. I thoroughly enjoyed this- the banter, the J/E loveliness, the mocking of that twit Cutler Beckett...

All in all, this was great! And I loved Norrington's part, his actions, though he wasn't in it long.

Great work! :)

Loved this.

The interaction between Jack and Lizzie was perfect as was their dialogue.

I also like that you included Norrington in it. He is such a wonderfully complex character.

wow, this story is really good! i loved it!

so.. this story had me smiling the whole time, and giggling. i loved it.

Wow, excellently written. And I agree with you on what you said on the Author's Note. Anyway, I loved it. Going on my favourites. Very in character and just lovely!

That's one of the really cool, plausible endings of AWE. A nice one, too, kind of; just got to get Will fixed up with some other than Elizabeth and we'd be good. I can't stand for Will to be broken-hearted (that's probably the main reason why I'm a W/E fan).

Anyway, excellent way to tie it all up! Almost feel sorry for Beckett, but he deserves it. Deserves worse, really, but we'll forget that in light of the holiday season. :)

I really enjoyed that! The conversation ran very smoothly and the descriptions were just as lovely. Excellent work! Definitely a new favorite.

Excellent! Very, very, very well done! I loved the whole interaction between Becksy and Jack and Elizabeth, and how no one notices that Becksy is in terrible pain from the branding he recieved. And he desrved it, didn't he? Was the heart what was sizzling in the fireplace?

Absolutly bloody briliant, love.

Ohh . . . WOW!

That was absolutely spectacular. "Sparrow took his orders from *her*" and "'It'll probably be small, too.' Cutler tried to imagine he wasn't implying soemthing, there" and "faster than it, he liked to imagine." *laughs ass off over everything* Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. Thank you.

Mm, you are right! Strikingly original. I would so LOVE to see that scene, but since it probably won't ever happen, rest assured that your depiction of it is more than enough. Great, great job.

I liked that a lot!

I liked it. Jack and her wedding night...very nice. The fics plot was different enough too.