Reviews for That Smile
littlegirlgonemad chapter 4 . 6/28/2011
poor james... but i love how he isnt a jerk. when will she tell him?
littlegirlgonemad chapter 3 . 6/28/2011
hmmm... sirius is being mature!

she cant fall for you if you aren't there to catch her

cutness!:)
littlegirlgonemad chapter 2 . 6/28/2011
the last line IS cheesy, but thats what makes it james. thats why we love him:)
littlegirlgonemad chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
i like the dialogue. it fits their personalities very well:)
LILYandJAMESareCUTE chapter 10 . 12/6/2007
Naw! Love the story, please continue! This story in the beginning is jsut so... real, and now its a really good story! :D
mischief manage chapter 10 . 12/1/2007
I just finished reading all 10 of your chapters. After reading your AN's I know that you are a low updater so I wont pester you to update sooner. You probably get that enough from other reviewers.
shetlandlace chapter 10 . 12/1/2007
I really liked this story-I like each of the characters & didn't expect Tammie to die. That one was a surprise. Do you plan more, or is it finished? Thanks for sharing it with us.
LipMC chapter 10 . 12/1/2007
aww that si so cute

is that the end ?
InkyHeart chapter 10 . 12/1/2007
aw...so sad...

Ang
withlovethegreeneyedgirl chapter 9 . 11/22/2007
omg ... awesome story ... update soon . please please please .
InkyHeart chapter 9 . 10/12/2007
You suck i liked tammie update soon
moonyxpadfootxwormtailxprongs chapter 9 . 7/17/2007
write more , otherwise i will SCREAM , plz, oh read my stories there so cool , and your storie rock , this was the first story i ever read on fanficy yay me lol .
emily chapter 9 . 7/9/2007
omg u HAVE to keep writing or i will probally go absolutly mad , that was absolutly brilliant this is the seccond time i red it and then i notice dchapter 9 it was so awsome but so sad is tammie dead or somink no poor sirius , u cant be siruis aw .
Nicole chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
Okay, your starting off really well, just ease it in, you know? I got the feeling you were going a little fast with it. But good job, it has a LOT of potential. :D
lovetodanceintherain chapter 8 . 7/7/2007
very good, very good, dahling! go a little more for the romantic, i think. but, of course, it is your story, so carry on!
51 | Page 1 2 3 .. Last Next »