Nice fic! It was a good idea to start from the Tunnel of lost love (I love that arc!) and then you took it so much further, got a bit carried away in all the fluff and all... Not that I mind! And the epilogue is really smartly written, with all thos different versions of the events

"... Ryoga knew what he'd choose".
I loved that. Way to go! I like it when the boys are smart enough to acknowledge their friendship.

Honey, you did a smashing job here. I was inexplicably sad when it ended. Kudos for the job well done!

This entire fanfic had me hooked. Very, VERY well written. I absolutely loved it, even though I'm reading it years after its debut. The characters and story was also very well accurate. Most fanfics ignore cannon material in order to make their own story work the way they want, but this story kept true to what was needed to be accurate and was definitely believable. The whole time I was reading, I could imagine these things happening in an actual anime adaptation (since the anime supports Ryoga X Ukyo heavier than the manga). This fanfic was just absolutely amazing, and it ended on a rather great note. No cliff hanger, no questions, just a perfect ending to a perfect story. I've read probably 5 at max Ryoga X Ukyo fanfics, but this one has definitely made its way as my favorite. Again, great great job. I wish their were more chapters, but an overly extended story can get repetitive, so I respect it ending. Really, this was just nothing short of amazing.

gosh! i love this story! i love ryoga/Ukyo

Cool:)

SNIFFLES sniffles... please make more Ryoga and Ukyo stories... i am so literally sad that you are writing something else now. you are one of my top favorite writer , if you must know.

one of my top favorite! please write more

It's so sad that you stopped writing about Ryoga and Ukyo. you inspired many Ryoga/Ukyo fans, I wish i could read more from you. This is the best story i have ever read/ besides Omiyagi, and most of your stories are my favorite. well all the ryoga/ukyo stories. i wish you could write about them someday. i know people out grew anime in time. but i wish to read more from you. i wish i started reading earlier, so that i could have witness the waiting of your update.

i love it! my favorite couple... and this is my favorite story!

I am one of those loyal Ryoga and Ukyo fan too! this is the best story! this also reminds me of my GF, and we are now married by the way. best story!

i love this story! and i love Ryoga and Ukyo so much!

Thank you for writing this. I read this when I was younger and I'm so glad that I was able to find it again :)

Wow. I mean, just WOW. I could NOT stop reading that. I moved everything about that story. So much of what happened between Ryoga and Ukyo reminds me of what happened in the beginning of my last relationship, and it made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I also loved how you ended it. I didn't imagine they did much more in that tree (that probably came later), but I also loved that it ended on such a positive note. I don't really know where I was going with all of this, but I just wanted to know that your story touches my heart, and that I really enjoyed it. Keep being awesome.

wow! this is my favorite! i like the lawn scene. i love how the kissed worked the most. this will be putted in my favorite