Your kids are undoubtedly cute! Because kids are cute!
Thank you so much for writing this and giving us BOTH views from our favourite Turky duo instead of only one... Very delightful. Thanks!

Sephis theme music played in my head at the end. Well done indeed.
And the sunglasses convo was so funny!

Gah it is just perfection!

A small change of heart there before bringing himself back to reality. Great wiring!

You're so clever thinking about how they might recognise each other later.
Reno enjoying that donut (is it similar to the creme filled one from Krispy Kreme? MY FAV)was too sexy. And him throwing his towel away after rude declined coming into his place was hilarious!

You made me GUFFAW.
Rufus looking like the laundry pile omg!

Fantastic

Now I think I might have enjoyed this before. Superb detail. I enjoy your every word

Very true, homes always stay with us. And different places stir up different emotions...
Reno and his driving haha .
Nice detail about how difficult it is to find the very doctor you want when you call. He needs a mobile phone ;)

Gah, so GOOD.

You did good on your fighting research with the hubster, I thank you for taking a hit for us readers.

You made me laugh multiple times. Rufus is just so great. Reno. Rude. I do have to read their names twice to make sure who is who but still. The dialogue. Amazing. Truly.

It works!
But why did rude look at Reno with a pang of guilt at the end? Because Rude was needed and Reno wasn't?
Very nice!

Fantastic and what a great idea!
Reno was in character and the dialogue flowed perfectly and I got tense!

This is pure genius. Thank you for the insights to the characters, and directing me to another awesome author as well as you.