Love how Shanks had explain it all to Luffy, really like a father. Don't be disappointed, it's great!

I'M not disappointed. I LOVE this. I always felt that there'd be a little emotional scarring after having your idol lose his arm because you did something stupid.

Nice. I think I can see why you are dissapointed but the part about yassop was good

Welp. I have teared up. I have cried. BAHHHHH. T x T
GOD. KAMI-SAMA. That gorgeous wistfulness and belief in describing Romance Dawn pirates and Shank's strength. It was too much. Hello hero.
"Am I Evil?" is pretty goddamn amazing and so freaking fluffy but this fic is just as amazing. 3
Thankyouthankyouthankyou for this story!

...Penicillin is an anti-biotic, not an anaesthetic or painkiller.

I really like it!

This chapter is NIT disappointing. What it IS is sweet. Very, very sweet

A well written and thoughtful piece. Thank you for the touching and enjoyable read. .

Another cutesy lolz love it.

You wrote "Am I Evil?" too?! AFJDKCJFJKGSKL! I love that story! You always portray Shanks and Luffy's relationship well. You make him so. It's and precious, while Shanks is truly a loving father figure. Your amazing. I think this piece of art was astonishing, no doubt about it. Perfection! Keep on writing and never stop!

XOXOXO
FULLMETAL

Shes disappointet.
She is DISAPPOINTED with this?!
This Fanfiction is many things and meaningful, as much as I can tell, is definitely one of them.
Maby it could be better but you can rewrite it anytime and even now its a masterpiece.
The characters are like they should be (you made me love Shanks even MORE and I didnt even know that was possible...).
So I think I speak for a lot of people, all of those who were eighter to lazy or too overwhelmed (I happen to be in one of those fractions a lot too...), when I say thank you for this great storry! )
greetings Fiona.

This is AMAZING. You've done it again! Your fics are truly meaningful and touched my heart. Keep writing!

i loved it very much there was NOTHING wrong with it. :)

Really liked your story. You describe the happiness and the hardness of a pirate life in such a wonderful way, especially the importance of your friends "still being there" as lucky.

I'd like to see more of your stories.

Lg, Ysaye

This is really great!