Please tell me you will continue this story? It's so good and I like the concept, it's so sweet how Sasuke is so addicted to just touching Naruto, even if it's literally bad for him. I'd really like to read more, or maybe if you continued it on a different website

I’m triggered because of that cliffhanger

Ew, she really just ruins things. I was hoping she was a nice match to Gaara but nope, Cloud stereotype of bad people just continues. I am really enjoying your writing and whoever's POV we are following even when I don't like them. The little details like people's observations, reactions and initiatives are all really interesting :-)

I hate that Umiko, disgusting. Poor Sasuke, then Naruto, then Gaara and probably Gaara's family. That plague is a menace.

I likes this story allot. Would like to know what happens next. Even though you're not into Naruto anymore you should finish it. Especially since you mentioned that you know the ending.

So good. I loved every bit. I hope Narutos problem is solved and you update more. Sasuke needs to realize his problem so they can be happy xD

"It's alive!" Lol, holy crud that totally killed me! That was to funny but the living soup thing is quite terrifying. Anyway so far I'm really liking the story. :)

Love this story and hope your doing well. Happy New Year's! Xo :) Ciao
Good luck!

OMG NOOOO, SASUKE WAKE THE FUCK UP AND LAY THEM ASSES ON THE GROUND. USE NARUTOS CHAKRA IF YOU HAVE TO, OMG HELP... *cough* um, this is a really good story... I may or may not have stayed up till 4am reading it. And I'm really sorry about your friend, I hope your doing OK. Like I really really hope your OK.

Holy fuck, I'm dead, that was amazing, im actually laughing my ass off... Shit stop being so perfect I'm supposed to be sleeping! That was amazing please don't ever change how you write, like ever.

Good so far! I wanna know what happens next... I hope they find a way to fix Naruto's chakra leakage!

Have you stopped this fan-fiction? It's really good you should continue it!

I meant to write this before. It was interesting, and please continue.

I just hope that you would continue this :)

needs more smuty actions between naruto and sasuke still pretty good though