Ugh such a great story

Dayum! Sexy and so well written.

THIS IS SO GOOD! Hot, steamy, sexy, angsty, and a dash of fluffiness... Every sort of genre I look for in smutty fics and more is here! I loved the build up, both in regards to InuKag's growing intimacy, and the reveal of what exactly happened that upset Kagome so much. Ah, misunderstandings and miscommunication. A classic InuKag drama plot! XD Your smut scenes are deliciously well written, and you did a great job capturing the personalities of both characters. Well done!

Wow! So hot! I love it!

GIMME THIS NEEDY WENCH OVER HERE A PART TWO!

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loved the perspective from Inuyasha. It's so often that Kagome gets the POV that I was pleasantly surprised when it wasn't. The way Inuyasha's tone came off as protective, primitive and also truly with a touch of Inuyasha. It's really indescribable how well you captured his character. He was so happy when they kissed, he was hurt when Kagome refused to acknowledged him, he was confused at her actions, he was innocent when he showed his shock from Kagome leading. Some of his traits contradict him at times and it was nice how you portray his macho-ness but would throw that to the wind for Kagome. Really amazing:) Thank you I really enjoyed reading this.

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One-shot skills, You've got 'em.

Again, another aspect I appreciate in your writing-they take the time to learn each other. Neither of them are experienced and bother are a little shy and this fits right in with their personalities. Plus, it isn't an InuYasha story without some emotional fumbling on InuYasha's part. Another nicely written piece. :)

Oh that was a sweet story...You did a beautiful job capturing both Kagome's & Inuyasha's character. It's a wonderful how you wrote the one-shot revolving around clearing the misunderstanding & bringing about their true feeling for each-other in light. It was one passionate story with a sweet Citrus.

Thanx for sharing this sweet one-shot. ;3

Despite the citrus exploding in my brain right now, I must say, I just read me some ART.

I am more than impressed by what you have here, seriously. It's a cross between touch-yourself-good and instant-orgasm-good, when it comes to the tangy lemon, but as for the feelings, the description, the characters and even the dialogue from Inuyasha's point of view...

That's what truly bought my eternal loyalty to you. Thank you, for this.

Sexy, naughty, awesome!

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Wow. So much in just one chapter. Great job! )

This is how romance should be written. Kudos!

Hot! Lovely read!