Reviews for Melt My Ice Away
Meenathequeen chapter 28 . 3/11/2019
the story was great. but all the Japanese meanings where informative but a little annoying but enjoyed the story none the less. but i know it was harder for you when everyone was crying for translation, and trust me i would've been annoyed too. anyway again wonderful story and i will look for your sequel my dear.
mariselortiz chapter 6 . 8/17/2018
Two very sick beings getting better to have sex. It's a little farfeych.
Mariselo chapter 28 . 11/14/2017
Buy. I hate when kags dies. The story was wonderful until the emd.
Mikitsukami chapter 28 . 11/28/2016
I really appreciate the time you must have put into this story. I'm writing one of my one of my oen right now (My first one!) But I'm working on better transitioning into my dialogue. Did you have a beta tester help you on this story, or any of your works?
Moriko Uchiha chapter 28 . 10/14/2016
this story is amazing. When will the sequel be up?
Undertheskys chapter 26 . 1/9/2016
That wind part at the end got to me, and i started crying. THE STORY WAS AMAZING, I LOVED IT
Undertheskys chapter 26 . 1/9/2016
ITS SOO SAAAD, WHY DID SHE HAVE TO DIE?! WHHHYY!?
Undertheskys chapter 24 . 1/9/2016
WOOOOOW HIS FAMILY NOW, COOL
Undertheskys chapter 24 . 1/9/2016
She has another son
Undertheskys chapter 23 . 1/9/2016
Omg so many tears, this chapter was so sad
Undertheskys chapter 20 . 1/9/2016
NO dont you darn mess with them Naraku
Undertheskys chapter 20 . 1/9/2016
Ohhh thats why only the oldest on youngest get a mokomoko
Undertheskys chapter 19 . 1/9/2016
Hahaha Hidemi bit him where the sun doesnt shine
Undertheskys chapter 19 . 1/9/2016
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY, HE SEES SHIPPO AS HIS AND HERS NOW
Undertheskys chapter 18 . 1/9/2016
Wow it was a dream... i got all excited for nothing
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