Only read it now and really enjoyed this more adult story.

Harri Dracie?

A very enjoyable story. You have talent. Can I suggest that a good proof reader would just finish off the writing to near perfection.

When you said January was going to have a good character development I didnt think it would be her being a round-about Hermione Granger and that her and Harry would be a couple. How stupid.

Really great story :)

You Americans are so weird about your love/hate of alcoholic beverages. Even calling it "alcohol" in a piece of writing says that you are unused to handling it. To a person living in Europe, this is so strange. We never, ever, ever talk of "alcohol" when mentioning casual drinking, the phrase is quite usual here. We call it wine, sherry, port, whiskey, cider, beer...

... and even doctors (mostly) agree that a regulated amount of, e.g. red wine, a day keeps your heart strong and your blood vessels clean...

As Paracelsus used to say: sola dosis facit venenum - the dose makes the poison!

Sorry if this comes over as a rant. I encounter the "alcohol" vs. "a glass of wine" thing so often, and it is usually the US writers who equate "alcohol" with "the devil", "uncontrollable", "can't resist" and "poison yourself". If you ever experience the pleasure of sitting on a Mediterranean beach, a glass of excellent red in your hand, relaxing after a strenuous day of work, think of me and enjoy!

keep up the good work. Awesome character development of January.

Enjoyed this so much, now I need to see what else you have written.

I sympathise with you Harry. Your hormonal pregnant wife can't decide what she wants and made sure that everything you do is wrong and you better shut up and nod only. You are not part of her experience you are just the butt of her frustration. Mom-to-be make sure your husband/father-to-be is involve as well. He doesn't experience the changes in your body but if he isn't involve his mental capacity will be in shock once he get a physical human being on his arms that he doesn't have a connection to during the whole pregnancy. my opinion just enjoy it while it is there. the baby will arrive unexpectedly so create a happy atmosphere and avoid stress.

really Hermione. you didn't allow anyone to stop you about SPEW and you allow Ron to dictate your career just like he doesn't?

ah... confusing... need a premise first or a prologue. hate to wait for the chapters to tell the story of the past so that I will understand what is effign going on.

Great story. We never heard if Harry was still friends with Luna and Neville. Also were is teddy and hugs grandmother teddy. The only thing I wished for is a little more from hermione. Was harry and hermione interested in each other romantically. It seemed like it but I'm not sure. I'd have like to see hermiones reaction to harrys wife. Like see hermione Google search her or something.

Chapter 14: Draco's proposal scene was hilarious!

And to top it off you made Harry miss the birth of his own children due to woman being evil controlling bitches in your story. Nice. -50/10 now. Truly I applaud you for such a steaming pile of feminist bullshit. Relationships should try to be that of equals. There is none here.

Threatening no sex is not something those in a healthy relationship should do. Shows a complete lack of respect. I imagine Draco and Harry quickly being made cuckolds based on their pussy behavior and every female dominating them. Negative 20 out of 10