| Reviews for Moments In Time |
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   Cynfenner chapter 16 . 6/14/2017 Sweet snippets! I clicked your link and watched the Vonage commercial. Never viewed before, hilarious |
| starryeyes10 chapter 16 . 10/1/2008 great story |
| Smackalicious chapter 11 . 12/19/2006 M, Lauren, you know, I just love this drabble. I was going through old stuff in my inbox, came across a review from you and was like, I should go review another JAG drabble. And since it's been awhile since I've read these, it's always nice to catch up again. :) This one has such a nice ending on it. |
| Smackalicious chapter 10 . 11/5/2006 Sad sad sad. Angsty angst angst. You can write angst. Don't think you can't. (Lo-Ball is on right now, I just thought you'd like to know that.) |
| Smackalicious chapter 9 . 11/5/2006 I love how you don't write really sappy fluff for every drabble here. I mean, you have a good grasp on what it's like to be an adult, and that's pretty spectacular coming from someone of your age. When I was your age (ha, like I'm that old...but I suppose, 6/7 years is a big difference), I always wrote fluff. I couldn't write angst or drama for the life of me. So know you're doing a good job with these. :) |
| Smackalicious chapter 8 . 11/5/2006 Oh, I just came across these again in my inbox and was like, I should go review those on This one is still so great. It's like, um, yeah, Harm's smile would make anyone forgive him. Hehe. I hope this serves as incentive to write more! |
| starryeyes10 chapter 15 . 10/28/2006 great story. |
| Staz chapter 15 . 10/27/2006 beautiful drabbles! so now you're starting with the writing again? ;) will be waiting on that! |
| McRose chapter 14 . 10/26/2006 This is not the usual self-analysis and introspection of a 14 year old, mature in some ways as Mattie was. I'd pefer to think that the thinker is Mac. Janlaw (1/2 of McRose). |
| AJeff chapter 12 . 10/25/2006 "This was their hearts talking, and it was pure and simple, without need for word-games. It was understood now that a missing piece of their world had just clicked into place, and when their lips touched, it was enough." Well done! |
| bluejay65 chapter 15 . 10/23/2006 Thoroughly enjoying these moments in time. Thanks for sharing! |
| McRose chapter 15 . 10/23/2006 Very well done (the latest 3). Janlaw (1/2 of McRose). |
| McRose chapter 12 . 10/22/2006 Since it has been a while (smile) I went back and re-read 1-10; I think I like them even better the second time around. So glad to see them tegether in 12. Janlaw (1/2 of McRose). |
| Syrae chapter 12 . 10/21/2006 Hey, have to say that I loved eleven and twelve. ANd I'm glad you're back! Lots of love, Rae |
| Smackalicious chapter 7 . 7/26/2006 This one is so nice. I suppose it's so ambiguous that you could really use it for any ship. It does have that Harm & Mac feel to it, though. But I think it might even work for Doggett & Reyes. Thoughts? |
