Id like to see more.

“Okay, just Dr. Venture… and the record of the month club… and those Dicks at the DMV.”

XD I love that line! And I totally know what he means! Glad to see you updated, just embarrassed it took me so long to go back. . . . 21 and 24 are great. Poor Dr O, no one takes him seriously. Will we be seeing the tentacled one himself?

Very well written. Venture bros. is one of the funniest shows on adult swim. You captured the characters as if was it on my tv in front of me. Good job... No BROCK though!

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Nice story. I enjoyed the beginning, espcially, when Dean interrupts Dr. Venture's dictation. I wish you had done more with the characters, although that'd take a LOT more time and writing.

Good work and thanks,

jenben

Fantastic!

I am a huge VB fan, and so I atimatically had some form of idea of how it should sound and feel, but man it flows just like the show, and I loved how you had some good dialogue with not only Dr. Venture, the boys, and Brock, but also with The Monarch and Dr. Girlfriend.

Also the dialogue sounds just like stuff the characters would say. But may I make a lil' sugestion, You should spend more time discribing the feel of the island instead of X2, or the Monarchs cocoon,I think that my improve the images of the story in the readers head.

Also I think you should try to do somthing with the season to cliffhanger, when Dr. Girlfriend is cut saying "monarch I'm..." and then the Monarch says "WHAT?"

I have already writen one, but I loved this fan fic so much I think you would write a good one.

Ia! Ia! Cthulhu fhtagn! :D So the Venture family has found R'lyeh? If so then it's a good thing they have Dr O along for the ride. In any case, I'd be interested to see where this goes. I like stories of the boys being good little science-adventurers.

I laughed at the line, "Don't interrupt Daddy while he's making history." So very Dr. Venture.

Awesome! You've captured the characteres to a tee. I loved Dr. Venture's monologue, which kept getting interrupted. :) Well done on capturing the pacing of the show.

I really like the beginning of this, it's very well done. I hope you write more soon!

Hey! Awesome, they have a Venture Bros. Catagory up! Finally! Well, it was good. I liked it, hope you update soon. My fic is soon to join yours in the hallowed hall of Venture.

Keep it Up!

JL

Please update!

I feel sorry for you, since yours is the only fic in this category. There should be more fics here! Anyway, this was funny, hope you continue.