That was fucking great. I havent laughed so hard since class is in session!

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this has to be my favorite chapter, I thought it was hilarious

Amy's now like Hidan, expect for the burning part.

Love the chapter, please extent your story more)

Rofl...

Amy: DIE MOFO!

Raphael: Uh, Amy, what are you doing? -stares at her beat the crap out of him in SCI-

Amy: Uh...nothing?

Oh my, I couldn't stop laughing at this and I laughed out loud most of the time while reading this xD This was the best I have to say and I was impressed by it.

The flashback with the dad, Raphael and Chester when they were younger was just brilliant xD I really loved the closing lines of it: "Somebody shoot me…" he muttered. That was just funny and I feel his pain :)

The whole trick or treating scenes were very hilarious and I just loved it to say the least! It makes a change to see Amy acting the adult and Raphael acting the kid and I found it quite amusing xD Haha, serves Chester right to pick on Nightmare! And God almighty, Raphael's insane obsession with butterfingers was just so crazy in a funny way. I really loved the ending and the bit where Raphael was chasing after that kid xD Please continue with this as this is one of my favourite stories now!

I think I've just pissed myself from laughing too much lmao!

Eww, Raphael liking an 80 year old woman, now that is digusting. And Chester is right about him being a pervert lol! To me they seem to act like whiny young children who never get their way and always do something to wind the other up. If I were there, I would have banged their heads together over and over again until they start behaving properly and civilised too xD

LOL Amy with a gun - now that is a deadly combination and I must say that I love it :) I think Amy should have shot the theif who was getting away with her PS2. Oh and the Yoshimitsu bit was just plain classic hehe.

God, Raphael really sonunds like a phsyco when he was a kid and yes, I can see why Chester hates him so much hehe :)

LMAO This was a classic chapter! I wouldn't have guessed that Chester and Raphael were brothers and it worked well. I thought Chester really missed Raphael but I didn't see that coming hehe. God, when they were growing up, Raphael did really sound like a pain in the arse for an older brother and I wondered how Chester coped with him lol.

I feel kinda sorry for Raphael after going through that much tortue xD.

LOL Chester peeing in Raphael's lemonade and I like lemonaded too hehe. Remind me to never accept lemonade from Chester if he offers me just in case he pissed in it! The ending was so funny and both Raphael and Amy's reactions were just classic. Poor Amy, I pity her sometimes for having Raphael as her dad...

Awesome, just bloody awesome! The beginning was just plain funny and I couldn't stop laughing at it hehe. It makes me wonder if Raphael does sleep with his plants lmao!

Poor Amy going off to Sophitia and her family's house, sometimes Amy does need a mother figure like Sophitia xD. Pyrrha and Patroklos said the most funniest things and they remind me of somethings that many young children will pick up on and keep on saying it :) Rothion played the typical husband really well and I liked how Sophitia glared at him!

Cassandra should ditch him and I like how you portrayed her in this too xD

God, Seigfried really is clingy as I said before and he acts like a drama-queen hehe. LOL Raphael deserved to be kicked in the balls and Sophitia was the right person to do as she normally likes kicking men there in the games! I wonder who's at the door...Anyway good chapter!

Ha, I knew it - Tira is a tart lmao! Overall another excellent chapter and I really enjoyed it hehe. God almighty, Raphael is a bit of a love machine, huh?

Hehe, I loved the convo with Amy and Talim. The thing that got me laughing so hard at that point was when Talim said "Tell me about it! My parents are about to send me off to the asylum just because I communicate with the wind!" That was a classic line and yeah sure, she says "Please listen to the wind" and I think what the hell lol. Raphael is being a strict dad as usual and I don't blame him one bit - he needs to watch her like a hawke at all times!

The thing with Tira and Raphael was so damn hilarious! I loved how he stripped off in front of her after she said "I want your body". Ha, serves her right I think! And Raphael blames her, saying us women are hard to understand - now that was funny lol. Amy, nope it's not a dream hun, you did see it lmao! xD

Haha, that was excellent! God, I'm surprised that Demuth is still bloody there - Amy must have hurt him real bad then hehe. I really enjoyed this chapter - much better than the other two.

Amy is just being a typical teenager as usual and she's my favourite character apart from Raphael. Who would have thought that Zas was very sensitive even when he is portrayed in the game as the bad ass dude who wants to kill everyone in sight to stop them from obtaining Soul Edge. It makes a change I think :)

I couldn't stop laughing at Amy burining her room completelty and sacrficing a chicken to get a bike - that was brilliant and I loved it xD God, I feel sorry for Raphael - maybe she needs a female figure lmao

LOL That was even better than the first chapter xD! Normally I hate characters such as Demuth and the others from the COS part of the game as they don't interest me but he really suited the part very well! I love the way that Amy played tricks on him and how she got her final revenge on him - that was so bloody hilarous, I couldn't stop laughing at it hehe.

The moments with Voldo were very funny too :) He's such an interesting yet weird character. If I were Amy I would have lead him into the basement and locked him in there!

Poor Raphael...here's some advice to him: Always hire a professional window fixer, you fool!

LMAO That was bloody funny. Who would have thought that Raphael and Seigfried were lovers hehe. Seigfried sounds more of like a clingy lover I think who wants to be with Raphael all the time. But yeah, I can understand when Raphael is looking after Amy and not wanting her finding out.

Overall I couldn't stop laughing at the whole "Santa" thing - I admit that was funny xD It's funny how he likes killing Raphael in Soul Calibur 3 lol.

Brilliance. Sheer brilliance. I read the whole thing in one sitting!