Oh my
sorry I just review here
in the begining I thought this story just has one event that lead to ed's action
and turn out that it has more than it
the first event lead to another and makes things go complicated
I really love this and you are just so smart huh

poor Ed and yeah I will go crazy if I were Ed's friend let alone family
he will give me heart attack everyday!

thanks for writing

haha now I just curious about whats going on here

This writing style is great! It gets a little repetitive in parts, but you'll get better the more you write! I'm trying to write a book, and I have the same problem. I also tend to make my sentences too short, but you know... Anyway, this was pretty good for being the first fanfic I've ever read! If you're passionate about your writing, stick with it and you'll be great!

I just reread this story. It’s absolutly lovely. Don’t ever give up writing.

I really enjoyed reading this and I am sooooo late to the party. It was a great read, that’s for sure.

Oh god
anorexia?

I love how you have displayed all of the characters so far (I have only read up to the end of chapter 2 so far but can't wait to see what happens next.). I especially like how you wrote the part with the nightmare of Ed and Al's mum.

Omfg wow XD Doctor marchoh

how exactly do a person's eyebrows narrow

wait
how does having metal limbs have anything to do with turning people's organs to steel
i mean
the iron in the blood would do it
not the limb

I have one thing to say.
/SHIT/.

Twelve? 0_0
And he's seen how many people die in front of him?
On a lighter note, what the heck just happened to ?
Reload the page, and bam! Whole new set-up. O-o
That's scary, that is.

Kania...? Hm. I'll remember that name, because it will most likely be important later.

I can imagine that if there had been any bystanders they would have been awful surprised...
A giant, intimidating suit of armor, scared of a pipsqueak? How very strange.

Ed is depressed, right? He's been starving himself, forcing himself to stay up at night, and he's just, well, depressed.
But good grief... What have I gotten myself into?

Wonderful story and great characterization. Neat!