Great story. I cannot wait to read more. I think I see where you are going with this. Tails will realize if Mobotropolis was never taken over, he would never have met them. He also seems to have realized the effect he has on them.

I have no clue how long it took me to read that but I do know the reason I've been holding off on reading it was because of how long the chapters are. My eyes are on fire. But I digress, the chapter was very well written and I eagerly await the arrival of the next.

Interesting, can't wait for next chapter.

You forgot a million words, and your choice of words is questionable at times.

Explain the extreme reliance on dialogue towards the end.

Wow. Unique idea, good work!. although i have to say, after the third one i started just skipping through them. you could make them a bit more exciting. i hope we find out where Tails fits in in the play soon.

I absolutely love the way you portray Sally and Sonic's relationship... you could easily become the writer for their scenes in the Archie comics if you wanted to.

Sally's sarcasm and witheld passion... Sonic's up front flirting and the fact that he seems oblivious... it's just so well written. And the last segement with Tails is true... he's the peacemaker between the two lovers, the intermediary. It's a perfect little triangle!

I'd love to write a page long review to make you smile and truly appreciative (which I am). All I can say, though, is that this is a wonderful chapter that truly portrays your talent. I hope you keep that talent going, okay? And you should know you are one of the best SonicXSally portrayers in Sonic fiction.

Aside from the obvious grammatical errors... This was outstanding. I loved it! Had me hooked the whole read! I only queestion what your motive was in making Tails the main character, if he's not exactly enjoying the play? I guess I'll never find out, huh?

This was very well-written. Beautifully written, actuallySally really, really angered me in this, but that just goes to show how good a job you did with her dialogue, huh? Great job! Keep it up!

Very well-written. I was looking for a good read tonight. I really enjoyed your writing style, and you portraid the characters very well. You have great attention to detail - small details, like the books being alphabetized that night when they were previously color-coordinated. You did a great job on the first chapter, let me go on and read the rest!

~S.F.

One has to wonder what the effect of finding out he might not be necessary for SOnic and Sally to be happy together would have on poor Tails. I hope you do update again, this is an interesting piece with a fairly unique perspective.

Nice story. I don't think people give Tails and Sally enough Credit. Kepp up the good work (because i'm sure as hell going to keep reading it)

I don't know if you're continuing this or not, but let me tell this. It's great. The emotions are well played into it, and the narration aspect of the story is remarcable.

In the latest chapter, the 4th, I actually CRIED! And it's really, really hard for a fic to make me cry and feel the pain that Sonic was feeling, or maybe it was my own pain upon seeing how he loved her, but she denied it because of her status as Princess.

I do really hope I will see another chapter of this wonderful fic, because it is one of the most beautiful pieces I saw on this place and because I'd really like to see how this is all going to end.

Until next chapter, if there will be one (I hope so).

Great chapter to an great story! *thumbs up*

Amazing and stuff.

Well, not much to say here; this story's amazing! I'm a big fan of your work, and I'm anxious to see the outcome of this. Sally's view of the situation is completely in character, and Tails watching the scene unfold and not being able to change it is perfect. Keep up the good work!

It's wonderful to see you continuing this, Miss I, as this is fast becoming one of my favourites of your work. Your discription and characterisation skills are once more head and shoulders above the rest and, apart from Antoine's accent sounding a little TOO mangled at times, your dialogue fits very well. (But since Ant only had a few lines, zat ees not being much of a prooblem, oui? ;P)

Great to see you still at it and can't wait to see how Sonic and Sally do on their 'date'. Or indeed how Tails will react to it.