| Reviews for Fool Me Once |
|---|
   apersonwholikes chapter 4 . 1/29/2018 This is amazing! I love your writing style; I don't believe I found a single major error in here at all! The story is delightful, and the amount of detail you use is perfect - not too much, and not too little. The way the relationship progresses in a more reasonable time frame than immediately starting out with something all-too-romantic, but still keeping the romance there, is what I like to see in more romantic stories. Also how you worded what each character said, I enjoyed, as well. There were very few quotations I thought could be reworded to fit the characters better - which is also rare, considering most writers, including myself, find it difficult to write the characters speeches like they would be in the original. As I've stated, I love your story. At the same time, I want to see more, but I also think the ending here is perfect. Wonderful job! |
| Crushcrush12 chapter 4 . 9/3/2016 O M G ME ENCANTO! POR FAVOR! HAZ MAS FLINX! O UNA CONTINUACION DE ESTE! |
| Crushcrush12 chapter 3 . 9/3/2016 Adasdafafadad Despertó! :v |
| Crushcrush12 chapter 1 . 9/3/2016 ME ENCANTO! |
| Poppy the Rabbit chapter 4 . 7/10/2015 This was so fucking cute! The last chapter was written with a lot of thought, you could tell, with the witty dialogue. I wasn't quite expecting Jinx to toss Kid Flash out of the car, I have to admit. But that's definetly a Jinx thing to do. |
| Robaezica W chapter 4 . 9/16/2014 AW SO SWEET |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/30/2013 haha cute |
| shea chapter 1 . 6/20/2012 love it |
| GhostDog401 chapter 4 . 4/6/2012 TOO CUTE LOVED IT! |
| a paper flower chapter 4 . 8/30/2011 Ok. I really like this story. You ht the characters perfectly, and it's just amazing! |
| flinx4ever chapter 4 . 7/25/2011 Awwwwww...the nile isn't just a river in Egypt. Nice! |
| grayqueen chapter 4 . 2/19/2011 I love it! It was cute! |
| The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 4 . 1/1/2011 This was amazing! I wish it could have been longer, though. Oh, well. (: this was great either way. |
| LilyRoseTheDreamer chapter 4 . 3/9/2010 Great story. He's still alive! |
| nequam-tenshi chapter 4 . 1/27/2010 good story |
