this is just gold! I could not stop laughing at the fact that HAN killed Palpatine! lol

Really beautiful story! I read it in two days! Excellent work

Sad but probably best chapter

Ventralla. Is cute

Cool stuff so far!

This was an excellent work if fan fiction. I loved Luke's journey, his many names and how he was innocent but not completely ignorant and helpless.

Good work, good overall writing and grammar etc... I am now off to find d the sequel...

*Applause to author*

"For a few moments, he stared down at the mess that Han called a hyperdrive. Then he backed away. There were some things that not even a miracle worker could fix." Best lines ever!

AMAZING STORY! THANK YOU SO MUCH!

Wow, what a unique idea for a story. This was great, thanks for writing it. I loved your version of Luke and exploring more of the Tuskan culture (not to mention that ending). I will definitely be rereading this at another time.

It takes like fifteen years of training to become a Jedi Knight after being taken as a Padawan why would Obi-Wan think Leia was in anyway close to becoming one.

Why would a member of the rebellion approach a stranger and offer them a place in the Rebellion. Unless there's some back story were missing here and they've got people watching Luke.

Ugh Krayt pearls can be used to make Lightsabers. A son honoring his mother by using hers would of made sense.

Where did the idea that Leia had less combat potential than Luke come from or ability with the force. The opposite should be true in this story with being trained from childhood. Honestly where does this sexist view come from. Their twins equal in the force.

The Executor isn't completed for like several months or a year after the Death Star is destroyed the first time I think.

Yeah Jedi would hunt down and retrieve that child their not above sneaking and the idea that sneaking has anything to do with the Dark side is crazy. Even more so if it prevents violence. Hell the start of ANH Obi-Wan does exactly this to the Death Star to disable the tractor beam.