Part of me hated the all bolding because it kinda hurt my eyes but at the same time it seemed to fit with the story.. which was epic btw. Another awesome story :)

it just...it just...(inhales a shaky breath then sighs) why? why would just end it on the best spot? you big meanie!

Whoa! This reminds me of a picture I saw.

This fic was mystifying.

Yeah, that's how to explain it.

Mystifying.

-cookies for you-

-oathkeeper.

That's what I'm talking about... This is the type of relationship I can see Riku and Roxas having. It's perfect and it blends seamlessly into Deep Dive AND KH2. Good job...

Ah! I've seen that picture too. Beautiful, as is this story. It's writen very well.

Oh wow, I love your take on that scene! I'm never going to be able to watch it again without thinking of this. The way you wrote it was just perfect too, makes it seem as if that is the way it was supposed to happen in the game, and the one we were shown was fake. Beautiful.

You have reawakened the Roxiku fangirl in me (she was getting rather bored because I never do much with them, but now I intend to!). I especially like the end, where you incorporated that quote that...um...otherwise didn't have a place in the game, really. Oh-and I know which pic you're talking about. _ I have deemed it the official Roxiku pic (for me, anywhat), and added it to the official Soriku, Soraxel, Akuroku, Akuriku, and Soxas pics. Yesh I loves dem.

All i have to say...is that is really good. i love it.

Oh my God! I'm so lucky to have found this! This is awesome. *_* I really like the conflict that the characters feel for each other, the pull, and the confusion.

YAYNESS! I've just taken this story's review virginity!

Good story. Just a litle short.

TTYL

Scarlet Michelle