You have such a way with words. You use them the way others would use water paints. That's true of all your stories, but it's especially true of this one.

Reading the first chapter made me feel like I was lost in a dream, whereas the next two made it feel like a nightmare.

There is some small part of me that wonders why you would categorize this as a Naruto story when only Sasuke is remotely in character - everyone is so new and strange as to be unrecognizable. Feels like a case of new characters wearing familiar masks.

But isn't that the entire point of the exercise? You got me. You reeled me in, hook, line and sinker.

Of course ninjas are liars. Of course Sasuke can't understand this perversely amused Kakashi or this scheming Sakura or this twisted Naruto. You took what could have been a weakness and made it a strength. And you did it all in under 10,000 words.

I've read every Naruto story you've written, and while each one is a home run, this is a morbid, wonderful, terrifying masterpiece. I don't know if you visit this web site or check this account any more, but if you do, then I want you to know you have done something truly grand.

That just became more and more convoluted and dark with each passing chapter.

Intresting story, but it felt strange. I dont know if it was because of the ooc or why. Might be that it was to much to take in and not enough time to do it in this short story. I think you could make it better if it was 3 times as long.
That way you could explore a bit how the character react.

Naruto an act?Plus Hinata is all blood thirsty...xD

Wow Sakura is badass in is twisted in a delicious way.

Damn that was good.

Incredible

I just read this and I must say I actually liked it. I, myself, don't usually seek things like this out, but I've read some of your other fics and I said to myself "Read it!", and that I did. It was very alternatve in my opinion, and I want to say Good work.

Love from: Eater Of Pudding

P.S. I'm currently reading Empyreal Paradox so I hope you get it done soon. But take your time doing it, I've read some fics were the authors just type them out. It doesn't end well. But you're fics have consistency and are well thought out, and that's what makes them so good. Keep up the good work.

While it is dark I really like the idea of a blood-loving hinata

Eh ... That was kinda strange ... Hinata is really OOC. She enjoys killing? Wow ... Heh, but with all the characters twisted and stuff, it fits the story, somehow ...

Anyway! Although this story was a bit odd, it was certainly an interesting read. 3

With the best of wishes _

~Laine~

Squirrel

Well, this was definitely a very different story. It was entertaining, but I won;t lie, it was definitely weird.

this is cool. it would be fun to see more stories from this AU, with more background, you know?

awsome work!

rather dark and creepy.i think it could have used more details on naruto's real personality although i guess it's kinda for us to imagine.

anyways this is written well and has a cool theme.

damn creepy kids..

The Rosetta Stone was a tablet that had the same verse written in three different languages, Egyptian Hieroglyphics, Greek and Arabic. It is this tablet that allowed us to come to understand all of the Egyptian texts that were previously a mystery. I hope that this helps further readers to understand exactly what this piece is trying to do.

wow I like it