| Reviews for The Deal |
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   Autumndusks chapter 1 . 7/15/2008 It could have used a more in depth smut scene. but cute, in a cliched and predictable sort of way, I guess. |
| ImFearless chapter 1 . 5/2/2008 aw that was so sweet, i loved it! :) |
| kcdancer chapter 1 . 12/1/2006 that was so cool! definitely a favorite |
| Tahti chapter 1 . 11/6/2006 This was so intense! I was on the verge of tears more than once, and I'm so glad that you gave them a happy ending, cause I didn't really see it coming (blame my moroseness over THE dreary promos). Wish the Others showed a little heart like you made them, in the show. I loved the smut, it was incredibly emotional, you managed to mingle sex and love beautifully, like it should be, and thus capture the "cosmic connection" Jack & Kate have, on every single level. Outstanding story, and I wish you write many more *sighs*, and thank you for this one! |
| pickmysong -was Kate108 chapter 1 . 10/9/2006 Aw... That is a beautiful story. |
| Svnh chapter 1 . 10/8/2006 all i can say is wow ! “Don’t make me promise to love again when I know I can’t” this story is amazing and i've loved this sentence, the best moment to my mind. you're very good at smutty stories, aren't you ? i read broken memories too and i was waiting for the moment he'll rememeber their night together and they'll making love, and i have to say that i wasn't disappointed... |
| Luluz chapter 1 . 7/12/2006 Aw i thought i commented here. I read this a while ago when i was notified and i was sure i commented but it looks like i didn't so...AWESOME FIC! I love your writing you are so the smut queen! |
| FoxBlues chapter 1 . 7/7/2006 ur writing is absolutely amazing! awesome one shot! great job |
| ameriker chapter 1 . 7/7/2006 GREAT story! I loved it! And loved them together! |
| EternalConfusion chapter 1 . 7/7/2006 Aw, YAY! I'm so glad they ended up together and happy and aww lil' kiddies! :D I love this, aww...again you stirred up my emotions with this one. Aww. hehe. Your writing is just :O legendary! Seriously, amazing stuff! Keep it up... |
| 1LostFan chapter 1 . 7/6/2006 Wow what a cool ending! I like this one a lot. Great job! |
| SonicH2O chapter 1 . 7/6/2006 kool didn't know you took request... |
| MissFantabulous chapter 1 . 7/6/2006 Ooh. Great job :D |
| jaterfate chapter 1 . 7/4/2006 i loved it. you need to make a sequal. with what happened after kate got pregnant |
| Suliet-Is-Love chapter 1 . 7/4/2006 Cute. That would make a good epsiode. Like if the others drugged them and they started to hallcuinate* things. |
