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This story is perfect, no doubt about it. I'm also glad you included Rio because she is indeed a seemingly important part of the story who often gets forgotten by the fanfiction populace. Anywho, story is awesome and KradxSatoshi is always great, especially in your stories. Great job!

o_O "Luke, I am your father." This was like that but much worse... erm... I mean better...

It's so wrong yet so enjoyable to read. Just another reason for Krad to be possessive of his host. I never thought of this before, but it certainly makes the Krad x Satoshi relationship even more twisted. I could see Krad creating his own perfect someone. He's crazy enough to try and it's not like anything would keep him from groping his own cold. Krad doesn't need pesky things like morals. Screw the rules, he has good looks! Haha. I really want to know what Satoshi would think of this, though. I mean, the kid already has pretty low self esteem and lots, and lots of issues. This would certainly just be another kick in the teeth.

You are SICK! *applauds* And you did it SO well. XD Rape is easy and magical rape is even easier, but you managed it without anyone touching each other. It takes some major skill to get that twisted and it's just freaking AWESOME. Thank you for writing this.

oh jeebus...poor satoshi

Wow... that was just... wow...

That was just wonderful! I was really absorbed in the story-it was fantastic! I love the idea-really original. As I was reading (before it happened), I suddenly thought, "Wait! He's gonna make her have Sato? So he'll be Sato's dad?"-and then it happened! I truly enjoyed this story, and hope to read more from you. I'm putting it in my favs, and I'm telling my friends... so... yeah. Keep up the good work!

Wow... Very twitchy-creepy. I like it.

Wow... it makes so much... sense! Great story! :)

To my favorites this story goes! (Wow, Yoda speech...)

Yay for blue popsicles, -Bowleena

Ooh, I've never read the mabga, so i don't know if this has any canonical basis, but that doesn't mean that I don't find it deliciously intriguing.

The premise that KRAD created Satoshi is a little 'sick' but in a good way that makes you quiver and good 'Oh.' Which is kinda what most things dealing with Krad are like. I don't think you're supposed to like a guy you're obviously meant to hate so much, but I don't care.

And the way you wrote Krad was absolutely fabulous. So very much him. And poor Satoshi. You also created another very interesting premise, in the ritual that breaks the seal on Daiki and brings Dark back. Something that could definitely be used in either a sequel, or another story from the same 'timeline'. Bravo.