When I said u, I meant I couldn’t to anything better not in a disrespectful way

Damn! That was the worst ending ever! Too simple and plain, but it’s not like u could do anything better. So overall it was a great story

How on earth do you explain naruto keeping the curse mark. The Kyubi’s chakra is toxic to all forms of life and other chakra it won’t just standby and do nothing as a foreign source is introduced to the body.

I remember starting this a while ago. Never finished it, and I came back to see why.

Now I remember.

It’s shit.

M’kay, that’s all.

You're a good writer, but this was a bad plot idea to begin with. Could have been better other then that well done.

You don’t have to reply to my last review. I read the A/N chapter. Thx for clearing it up.

What’s MM? I’ve read several fics where the author posted lemons on AF, HF, and AO3, but I’ve never seen MM used before.

Character development is shit

this was amazing. I loved it really I did.

Its very annoying to use the word count filter function and see a writer boosted their word count by answering reviews in chapter. Please stop doing that once or twice I get but every chapter?! The hell

awesome!

Fuck no

More paragraphing would make this easier to read... Also is this first person or third.

The way you wrote is perfection. Your plot is bad though. Great writing, bad premise. No offense, but you could use your writing skills for something better.

very good i thought it would be boring for so little chaps but u proofed me wrong u have my respeck