Dude...this story it's so poetic! I mean just wow, you have me at a loss of words...I mean just...wow...

-From Kara-chan.

So true. If he hadn't been so arrogant, and actually formulated a backup plan, he wouldn't have lost. Heck, I think L was the only one who managed to keep him at least partially sane. Good story.

Oh, that's so sad. Considering what happens. The first half of the story felt... I don't know if I'm saying this right, it feels a little loose. Like I'm missing something, but I can't think of it.

But I LOVE how you ended it with the last paragraph. Giving it that final feeling, final touch.

Now to spite you, I fav.

That's phsycho, but it made me laugh. I don't know why, but it did.