Very well written, I enjoyed reading this story. Its one of the few crossovers with SGC that did not have harry going all supperpower.

So who CLEARLY Imperiused Remus? Snivelus? Dumbledore? Both are suspects.

Interesting story! The skipping around was a little weird but kept me moving from one idea to the next. Love Luna, Hermione, and Jack!

good story

Great story. I would have loved to know why Remus turned traitor, but I guess I’ll have to dream up my own version.

I have to say a sincere thanks to let us know how Ms. Figg is doing since Harry reported her. I was hoping and you came through!

Nice run!

great story

This would probably have a lot more visibility if it were filed in the correct section instead of "TV X-Overs" which nobody ever looks at.

Pretty Decent for a harry potter crossover :)

You have a twisted mine in writing this story 'out of order'. lol for real i dont look at it as out of order but more like flashback of sorts like what they did in Arrow for 5 seasons. i think you did excellent work with this story. i thoroughly enjoy reading this story.

hmm..i know im late for the party but i thought that funeral was for him..you keep jumping back and forth that it's rather hard to keep up where you going with this but fortunately im mostly adept at this so i sort of figure out who's funeral that was

Jack kind of reminds me of Solo...i can see it too lol

I know your story has been completed for more than ten years now but I felt it deserved a review as I invested several hours reading it nearly half of it...

...Your story had promise but by chapter 13, I had to give up and stop reading. Such a shame! It's too disjointed to follow without stopping frequently and putting the pieces together!

Wonderful concept though!

Gute geschichte aber zimlich sprughaft in der handlung war zimlich aufwendig da den Roten faden im auge zu behalten.