Cute! Hahahahaha!

The last part was TOO cute, I'm smiling so hard. "Hips are wobbling as we speak." - Can I just say that I adore the way you write Ryoma? You keep him in character, capture his personality, while giving him such funny inner monologues. Loved this! :)

So cute! XD

Ah, I love it.. Especially that last line.. I haven't read the story so.. I'll try to search it :D

~Kazuya

"The art project was something his class had to do as well. Ryoma had planned to draw stickmen himself. It was a cop out, but he didn’t have time to waste laboring over illustrations. He had tennis opponents to thrash."

That paragraph cracked me up.

This fanfic was absolutely entertaining!

so good. the quality of your work is high. thanks for the read!

kyaah! veleveteen rabbit! that was a given to me as a christmas present when I was a kid. haha. brings back the nice story

hehe also cute fanfic. I loved the last part

Lol...and their relationship improved thanks to the Velveteen Rabbit...lol...what a way...but really sweet though...

Aw, that's just cute, all the way! And awesome characterisation! One of the best I've read!

aw... so cute!

love it!

Aw! Cute fanfic! _

very cute -

I like it. You remained in character, and I like their increasing interaction.

I read "The Velveteen Rabbit" several times as a child. It's a good story.

That's so cute! Excellent excellent story!

Not the best story I ever read, but it's okay. You should write more. I think you should write a story about Sakuno and Ryoma at school. Something happens and it ends with them making out under a Sakura Tree, romantic huh?

Please write!

Thanks :)