Wow amazing

I think this is the best you've written so far! I really like how Doc realized he was wrong and is going to make things better by being in Lightning's pit! Thank you!

I liked it. :) Doc's one of my favorite characters, too. :)

Hey, cool. I like it a lot. Did you have this online a while back? It seems kind of familiar.

Excellent! Tells the part that the movie left out! Great!

Oh man! I'm so glad I found you!

I love the Hudson Hornet as much as you do...

Anyways, I really liked this story. You were really great on explaining Doc's thoughts and reality. If anything, this is how I would have pictured the scenerio at Radiator Springs after Lightning left town.

IO love your describing ! With the eyes sparking and everything .. nice job ! :D

What a wonderful story. Make me what to go see the movie again. I hope you put up some more.

That was incredible. I loved every second of it. Great job. Keep up this kind of work, and one day...

Horray for filling in the blank spots! It's nice to see an in-character story. I got to the Cars fanfic section and saw that about 50% was Slash, so I was a bit concerned as to what elce I has going to find. Good job!

Wow! I absolutely loved it! Very nice :)

Nice! I'd thought of doing a story like this, but you handled it pretty well. (Much better than I would've!) Doc's thoughts were very in-character, which made them great to read. I'd love to see more of your writing, so keep up the great work!