Haha...that last line was hilarious. I hope you update soon. The story has a nice start.

I like this, i want to read more. Growlanser is bangin. u should submit a lot more to read when add more

Hm, very good. I had some doubts at first, but they have been swept away now. I hope that you'll update soon.

Hey Kitty Kat! This was amazing! I loved the last one! Hilariouse! If no one else likes it, they have to be insane! You heard me! I called ya'll crazy! What do you think about that? LOL! I hope I can read the next chapter! You so have to keep going! I think I'm going to make one later...if I can stay awake! LOL! And of course you're here too...T.T*sweat drop* Ya... I'm going to make a quiz on quizilla too! I hope you can read it some time! Well I have to go, I'll review some more later! This was amazing, it kept me interested and the fact that I know who they are makes it so much better! And 'Fence Walkers', Kitty you should know that's not what we call the sexually challenged.

So far this story seems to be a good start to an excellent read, a few minor mistakes though they really didn't distract from the story very much. Well done.