Reviews for Written in the Ashes
TwinkleTwinkleI'mAStar chapter 3 . 5/30/2019
In one word, this story was BEAUTIFUL.
I'm at loss of words *_*
Forest of Deb chapter 3 . 1/14/2019
Wow! This was thrilling
sky9840 chapter 3 . 12/21/2018
Wow, the last scene bought me to tears! I definitely see how you weaved in today's societal issues into the story. Thank you so much for writing this. I hope you'll write more!
shadowfax00 chapter 1 . 4/15/2018
Well, the story felt a bit stretched in the beginning because of the suspense regarding what happened, but you wrapped it up well. I think this was beautifully written. Like a Monet painting, evoking vivid imagery, feelings and the passage of time.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/16/2017
Oh WOW this was just... I have no words. The only thing I can think of that sounds coherent when typed out is how much I LOVED the scene when Past-Hermione (originally) tried to kill Past-Draco. How both of them started out with morally ambiguous ideals but then ultimately spiraled down into near insanity like Voldemort. That wad just, PERFECT.
IN SHORT: I AM IN AWE
Ninja Midnight chapter 1 . 6/21/2016
Well, damn. Its probably been awhile since anyone's reviewed on this story, but whatever. I did not expect it to take the course it took. That was brilliant.
Vernoodle chapter 1 . 9/27/2015
Great story. Quite confusing... Did they want to end the war and emerge new leaders? If so, why would hermione go along with that, as she seems fairly canon? Confused, but enjoyed it nonetheless. :)
bright places chapter 1 . 8/9/2015
I love this. It's so mysterious and enthralling. Each moment led up to the next and I was so so scared. I love stories like this where they control the outcome of the wars. Thany you. This was so great.
niffaith chapter 1 . 3/9/2015
This is exactly the type of fic that I always seem to look for yet I can never find. Thank you so much.
kitcatscratch chapter 1 . 1/5/2015
So well written. I especially loved the way you depicted Draco as still being himself, even with his memory wiped out. It added a sense of tension because in the end, you didn't know if he would continue on his original path. Pick up that "mantel of insanity" and exact revenge on Hermione. And the way he grew so mad. I like to think that he will always have the element of instability in him and hence, never really know what will happen. At the moment, I think he viewed his memories, but I imagine it's like watching a video of yourself doing stuff you have no recollection of. In the end, you have the images but the feelings behind it are not quite there. So maybe he won't go back to that sort of mental instability. Though it's been awhile, so glad I found this story. Better late than never!
anidot90 chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
Dude! This was amazing! Why haven't I seen this before! Great work!
Syhbfyjfyjbv chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
This is an amazing and orginal idea, super creative and well expressed and enjoyable and understandable. Intriguing. Thanks so much for posting for others to enjoy!
Emily chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
This is ridiculously amazing. I can't handle it's beauty. You are a truly wonderful writer.
Aimz chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
This doesn't have nearly as many reviews as it truly deserves! So on my second time reading this, I was compelled to do so! Ah, what can I say that the others haven't? A truly magnificent piece of fiction, what amazes me is the genuine human emotion you're able to reflect from the characters through your writing. Everything is spot on; its real and raw and when reading it, doesn't feel like fiction at all. Superb work! Well done!
Tisa chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Different and unique. Well done.
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