This is freaking adorable. All the nickers and whinnies and horse-worry-nuzzling was just the best thing ever.

Oh my goodness. I think I'm going to cry. That was amazing. A beautiful story. Your descriptions of the herd, the sensations, the equine body language... and of course Mirage himself. Your portrayal of him was perfect. So good.

Wow, I would never have thought of this, congrats for such a detailed view of social order within the herd, while keeping their intelligence. Great job! :)

Wonderful story! The forms they took were perfect. Mirage as the narrator made me smile. Just his tone set things so well.

Thank you for writing this.

There are simply no words great enough to describe this, but I'll do my best. This was an amazing piece of work, so different from the normal "Human!formers" that we see all the time. I also like how it was from Mirage's point of view, as most would probably have expected it from Prime or one of the more known 'Bots. I was a little edgy about the 'Cons as wolves, but I understand the logic behind it (wolf fanatic here, XD). I felt so bad for Ratchet! He must have felt so useless, being unable to do his job. I also kept thinking about poor Jackie. If someone had died he would have felt so guilty.
You blew my mind. *boom* Keep up the amazing work!

interesting, how on earth did the decpeticons catch on anywho? of all the things that wheeljack coulda done lol. still it was interesting

Tis was a unique and enjoyable read-cudos to you!

I love this story! It is one of the best I have read. You took a very unique twist on a common story line. It my be different but that did not make any less of a great story.

I love the way you wrote the body language of the horses, it was just beautiful. I have horses... well a horse named Tim (but I take care of other peoples horses). I have just sat out in the field and watched them for hours. And when I read this that's what it felt like. And it had a lot of my favorite autobots in it, which makes all the better. The ponies were just to cute, and the twins were the best! Optimus and Prowl were awesome. Poor Wheeljack, I'm glad he was forgiven. And Ratchet well being Ratchet.

With that said, I just loved it. It is just a beautiful story, and I was sad when it ended.

Ha ha ha! Poor poor Mirage! But hey, I've always wanted to know what it was like to be as a horse...

I've watched enough horse movies to perfectly imagine the part where Mirage was galloping towards the Ark. My heart was absolutely racing. Ahh...

And there's actually someone on here that understands horse terms! I thought I was the only one, so when I wrote horses into some of my fics, I thought nobody would understand.

Oh Wheeljack, you really shouldn't have turned them into horses. Why not humans? Oh well...

Great job!

How does this only have 51.. well 52 with mine.. but only 51 reviews?

Dear Primus this was the best transformers fanfiction I have ever read. I mean I might be the tiniest bit biased because I myself am a horse person and a proud owner of a grey irish sport horse.. but I mean you perfectly conveyed the body language, and sensations, the base animal instinct and thoughts. It was, primus, this was absolutely beautiful. And something I know for sure that I will read this a thousand times over.

Thank you so so much for posting this here!

Much much love:

Animelover

it's really good and interesting, but rather scary and unhappy.

oh, the twins were really brave, and admirable

Totally loved this story! It was so like a running film in my head the whole time. Love rereading it, a few times

beautiful story :D

this is an amazing story do you show horses or ride horses because you know more about horse than most people. i mean i no alot ive been riding and showing horses cens i was 10 mounths old and you just made the best horses story ive ever read. its so nice to have someone that now and likes stufe like i do so thank you for making this grate transformers/horse story its and grate combo :D

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Utter bogglement. This -should- be complete, silly crack, yet instead it's an amazing meditation on the essential cores of these characters, as well as how much their shared philosophy shapes who they are.

Beautiful writing, too - you do a lovely job conveying the sheer physical sensations.

The last line is gorgeous, and so sad-but-funny in context.