I have a stiff right now, care to suck me ?

Nuuuuuuuuu!

Y U NU MAKE THEM A HAPPY ENDING?!

Okay, read about Vader trying to be compassionate is absolutely hilarious

Me: *in sing-songy tone* you're developing feelings~! You're developing feeli-
Darth Vader: Shut up before I rip your tounge out.
Me: But You know it's true, sir~! Not to mention the fact that you're defending yourself on this proves my point and also gives me invaluable blackmail on you..
Darth Vader: *thinking* crap she has a point.

I actually find Vader... Slightly adorable in this.

Don't get me wrong, he's a total badass and completely terrifying when he wants to be, but when he's actually displaying normal human emotions and expression he gives the impression that not all of Anakin was lost and is still, deep down a good person.

WHAT! NO! YOUR KILLING ME!

i hate when the charactor i like is killed. it always happens. but good story

awesome story and very funny.

I would imagine Vader having sympathy and empathy for slaves as he was born of one himself.

Aaaaw! Vader is such a sweetie...

I'm loving this... nice use of humour and intrigue

Wow what a great/depressing story! The end almost made me cry but it was great!

Fae

Great fun. Last line was definetly the best. That was fun

dang that ending was a twist. never saw it coming i have to admit. very good story, even though (compared to some of the star wars books i've read) it should be a little more techy (if thats a word). its good considering that you aren't familiar with the movies. if you were, this story would be sweet!

one word...WOW