First; Namek is the Planet, calling Piccolo a Namek is like calling an American, America, Piccolos race are Namekians

Second;; it has been well established that Goku had a power level of 3 Million in his base form vsing Freeza on Namek and that when he used Kaoi-Ken times 20, he was still barely effective against Freeza which means Freeza in his base form(or 4th transformation for those unaware that said form is his base) had at minimuma PL of 60 Million to deal with Goku's temporary 60 Million(Kaoi-Ken times 20 would have been a serious strain on Goku's body). Which means Super Saiyan grants the stated 50 times Power boost putting Goku during his Namek Freeza fight at a PL of 150,000,000, so Android 18 being a stronger model then 19 that fought Goku's stronger then 150 Million(his Training for 3 years would have raised his base above 3 Million) for how ever long would put it at minimum above 100 Million and thus Android 18's power above even that, the idea she has a level of only 35 million is silly

Great story, I absolutely loved it. Although I hoped that you would document his return to Sunnydale with 18, it was a good ending BUT I STILL HOPE THAT YOU MAKE A SEQUEL TO THIS. Especially after Dragon Ball Super has ended a few months ago, so you more than ever have more plot to continue this story & eventually also make a story how he returns home. I will keep following you in hopes that you make a Sequel.

Naughty 18 strikes again, Cander won’t know what hit him

Will Piccolo arrive in time or Goku appear like in the Cannon? Or better yet will Xander’s will achieve new heights and power?

I like 18’s and Xander’s thoughts of each other but I hope that they get together with more context...

Damn, 18 is entranced with our MC

Ahaha naughty 18

Ahaha I honestly wasn’t expecting that XD

I never like Yamcha and this scene is exactly one I could see happen

How strong will he became? Super Saiyan? SS2? very curious

I always thought that Xander’s dislike of Angel was because of Buffy and although I don’t quite like pd it at the time, here it was understandable because the Seal was losing strength

You have great ability to write a captivating story. I came for the DBZ reference but stayed by your writing.

lots of potential, not a lot of it fulfilled tough. didn't help that you basically just followed the original story. of course, vegeta is going to face no repercussions, xander has no issue fundamentally changing another being, nobody has learned anything from the whole ordeal, etc etc
sigh

i can't believe you've mixed up the facts of your own story.
according to your own story vegeta and xander are COUSINS, not half brothers. it is goku and xander that are half-brothers.

it's struck me for several chapters now, this story is just so flat.
none of the emotions seem organic. it's like you've tacked them on, instead of letting them arise naturally.
it doesn't help that you keep switching povs so frequently that it's impossible to really start sympathizing with a character.
every time i think you're finally giving a character a chance to get emotional, you have them say, "damn you," and that's all there is, no expression of fury, no rising tension, no climax, you cut it off and go on to the next characters speech.