This letter should have been sent to Hermione. It might have let her see what damage she did.

"Mum yelled at me for leaving my pencils were people could step on them"

"no longer the most important object in Hermione’s bust, busy lifr."

you may want to fix the mistakes :)

and the ending was so sad, but i loved the story. Hermione seemed a touch occ, she cared enough for harry to help him, but she wouldn't neglect her family more than she had to, plus she is so perseptive...still awesome story! bz x

thi is so saD AND GOOD.

Wow...just...wow. This was just amazing. THat's all I can say.

Wow this story was so good and so sad. I mainly like it because I HATE Hermione, she's such a Mary Sue.

how sad. I really like how we see her point of view. Not only do you feel how she's feeling but you feel how Petunia might of felt when her sister went off to the magicial world. Written very well might I add.

that was really good! I'd like a sequel, though...maybe meeting again and talking.

LIKE WOW! THAT STORY WAS REALLY GREAT!

That is so excellent. For the first time i can feel irritation to Hermione's character. Her poor cousin, bad Hermione.

8/10 xx

wow. This was amazing.

Very nicely written