Naruto did something really horrible in this chapter. Sasuke is a rape victim. Penetration of any kind is rape. It doesn't have to be with a penis. Fingers or any other foreign object is rape. And yet, despite the fact that the assault happened the previous day and Sasuke had a mental breakdown in response it it, Naruto was screaming at him and slamming him up against a wall because of some broken china. I know it was his late mother's, but that's no excuse for what he did.

It bothers me a lot because, even though Naruto cried over what he did afterward and felt bad, the chapter was all about making us feel sorry for Naruto instead of calling him out for his truly inappropriate behavior.

You can tell how much the chapter was biased toward Naruto because Sasuke's response to what he did was not at all realistic. Sasuke acted like he wasn't affected by Naruto slamming him against the wall, he agreed that his anger was just a tantrum, and then he apologized to Naruto for acting out when he heard him crying. I mean, come on. Sasuke just had something very violent and traumatic happen to him, something that triggered past memories to come up and caused him to have a breakdown. How is it possible that Naruto, another person he loves and trusts, suddenly going super rage mode ("Sasuke had never seen Naruto like this; he could physically feel the aura of rage around the man") WOULDN'T trigger Sasuke a second time? He already went through something scary with Itachi and his parents wouldn't do anything about it. Sasuke has a past history of people in his life who are supposed to care about him failing him, and now Naruto goes way overboard, and right after Sasuke's been traumatized. Under the circumstances, it's just not realistic for Sasuke to be so understanding about what Naruto did.

Clearly you wanted their argument to be the trigger that would get Naruto to tell Sasuke about his past, but you didn't have to be so nice to Naruto when he screwed up so badly. Naruto could have talked about his past without the story downplaying what he did. I think he really needed to feel the consequences of his actions and not have Sasuke be so accepting. In a lot of ways, Naruto is a terrible guardian for Sasuke, which is understandable given his age, but he's never going to get better at it if he gets instant forgiveness every time he royally screws up. I think the story owed it to Sasuke to be more sensitive about how Naruto's actions would have actually made him feel.

This is really interesting

aMAZING story and plot. I did wanted Naruto to take Sasuke at least once but still it was good.

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this is disturbing yet intriguingly enough to be pulled in and read ... the coments. spoilers.

I'm done reading this for now I have the worst feeling like Naruto is going to die or something so I'm taking a break on this book...

Naruto was obviously startled and a bit jealous when Sasuke brought up making out with girls. And Sasuke was obviously upset and jealous when Naruto flirted playfully with Hana. What the fuck Naruto are you really going to use Hana to try to distract you from your feelings for Sasuke! I bet that puppy is going to become Sasukes bestfriend. I can't believe Naruto won't just give Sasuke a chance! Holy shit an entire one year time skip! I can't believe Naruto is still dating Hana...Sasuke should just make a big fucking move! I am very glad Sasuke finally told someone (Even if it's Karin) his situation with Naruto. Yay Karin is willing to help Sasuke get Naruto! Fuck yes Karin is a flipping genius getting Sasuke all sexy and buffed out a bit, making him dress more sexier, putting eyeliner to accent his eyes, and then going on a fake date with him to get Naruto jelly! Karin is like me this is something I would do! Naruto was obviously checking Sasuke out and was obviously upset and jealous! The plan is working! It's also very obvious that the NaruHana Relationship is a sham... (When Karin was molesting and kissing Sasuke I have to admit I got super pissed...But hey I would do the same so I can't be that pissed..)

Thank God Naruto will be homeschooling Sasuke. Sasuke should stop being difficult and tell Naruto who molested and hurt him so Naruto can slaughter the mother*cker! Sasuke isn't the only one who has issues so does Naruto they both have been through some tough shit their both mentally and emotionally fucked even physically... They need to try to understand each other... Holy shit I really feel for Naruto... At eight having been used to set a bomb in his father's room and killing him off accidentally...Then seeing his father's chard brunt corpse...Being hated and abused by everyone...Also being neglected and hated by his own mother...Then walking in on her Corpse hanging from the ceiling...I could see he broke a little his sanity slipping when he saw his mother swaying from the ceiling...Being put into a Mental institution because he had lost his mind...And then finally being able to leave at the age of ten... Fuck they love each other they just can't be together...

That escalated quickly...Damn Naruto was a fucking sexy blow job... Naruto and Sasuke need to make love already! Kabuto really fucking pisses me off! HOW AWFUL HOW DARE ITACHI RAPE SASUKE! STUPID FUCKING KABUTO BRINGING THOSE HORRIBLE MEMORIES BACK AND MAKING THE BOY GO INTO A PANIC ATTACK! Naruto should try to make Sasuke feel better...

I love how protective Kakashi is of Naruto. Yay there will soon be KakaIru I can feel it! Awe a drunk Sasuke and Naruto is adorable! I fucking love Kiba for his brilliant idea of a game! XD That NaruHina so adorable! That part in the closet with KakaIru was hilarious XD. Why is Naruto so cute? XD Naruto is such a dork when he's drunk.

What the fuck why is NaruSaku still happening?! Typical Neji being over protective of Hinata. Yayy ShikaTema! Hold up is there possible ChojiIno as well? Wait up is there LeeTen? Fuck yes NejiGaa! Wait is there KibaHina? Sai is there as a 'friend' of Sakura's maybe he was the one Sakura was making out with? Naruto is so sweet saving Sasuke some chicken nuggets. The NaruSaku disgusts me... XD Of course Gaara could see Sasuke obviously likes Naruto. I live Gaara for saving Sasuke. I fucking knew Sakura was cheating on Naruto with Sai XD and now she's pregnant tsk what a slutty hoe ass bitch! Poor Naruto he's too overwhelmed with work and worrying for Sasuke and Sakura cheating and dumping him and his sickness the poor boy needs a damn break.

Naruto cares for Sasuke so much. Sakura is such a cheating heartless greedy selfish bitch! Poor Naruto really wants to help and understand Sasuke because he doesn't want the boy to go through what he went through. Yay Gaara is Sasukes friend! XD Sasuke was checking Naruto out. Naruto was checking Sasuke out too XD.

It's true Sasuke needs to stop feeling sorry for himself and start to let Naruto Understand him. Holy shit Sasuke was cut by Itachi...Did itachi rape him as well at the age if nine!? Poor Sasuke...but honestly he should tell Naruto about all of this so the blond could understand his reasons (him) better. Awe Naruto comforted Sasuke...and apologized Naruto really is a sweetheart. Sakura is such a cheating hoe such a cheap slut such a f*cking dirty whore! Awe Sasuke has a crush on Naruto. Naruto should really listen to Sasuke and not be in denial. Sasuke should get proof that Sakura is cheating! Now Naruto is confused as to why he kissed Sasuke back...

I think Naruto could be good for Sasuke because he himself had a pretty awful and tough Childhood so he understands Sasuke. So is Sake like Bisexual or something? Sakura is such an annoying, Stupid, Cheating liar! Why is there NaruSaku I can here for SasuNaru!? Yay Naruto is a good cook! Naruto is literally such a sweetheart. Sasuke thought Naruto was adorable!

Sasuke seems like the typical bratty teen and Naruto seems like the typical college student. I really feel sorry for Sasuke so I'm glad Naruto took him in. Plus the age difference isn't that bad just around for years.