| Reviews for Where'd Ya Go? |
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   Lightning Strikes Multi chapter 1 . 9/19/2016 I like your writing style, but thre are a couple of details that are ruining thestory for me. First, no way would a team be lead by an enlisted man with only 3 years of experience, especially with a on the team. Also, at so few years Tony would be a E-4, Specialist, maybe a Sergeant？Definitely not leading a Special Forces team. It would flow better if he wa especially direct commissioned by the President for some reason, maybe into a nice O3 or O4 position. Unlikely in real life but flows better than a junior enlisted in charge. （Sorry if I got some terms wrong, I only really know army terminology, not Marines.） |
| Alitchen chapter 1 . 8/7/2010 Wow that was amazing, I have never read a more fascinating story, I'm stunned, it was a perfect story. Wow. |
| me chapter 1 . 12/19/2008 my goodness, please do some research! Semper Fi (or Semper Fidelis) is what the marines say, not the us army. (i think they tend to say "Hoorah!") also, spend some time looking into army ranks and the distinction between officers and enlisted personnel. |
| SmileyAddy chapter 1 . 5/5/2008 great chapter |
| NickTonyK chapter 4 . 5/5/2008 Hey as long as it doesn't involve Kate, sounds good! |
| Yumiko-chidori chapter 3 . 3/9/2007 Hey I really love your story! Its great! *gg* PLEASE go on! *beg* Bye -v |
| Yumiko-chidori chapter 1 . 12/13/2006 Hey I really love your story! Its great! Ive read it, I dont know, 3x,4x.. It would be nice if you would go on with this story, please! o Bye dinozzo-chan |
| madamwolf chapter 3 . 9/16/2006 it's not bad but Tony being the army makes no sence, he's in a branch of the navy, you can't join another branch of the military while your already in one. I'm sorry if I'm being annoying and picky but I live a in a navy family, heh. But ya know the story's not horibble and most people probably wouldn't know any of that stuff that I mentioned above since they probably don't have military familes. |
| devil3567 chapter 3 . 9/12/2006 Love the story update soon. |
| devil3567 chapter 1 . 9/1/2006 I really hope you finish the tony in the army story . I love the idea please update soon. |
| CripticWolf chapter 3 . 9/1/2006 I cant wait for you to continue this story its really great ) |
| NewMutant2 chapter 3 . 9/1/2006 I'm just REALLY glad you're keeping up with this one. I'm excited fof the next new chapter. |
| shirik chapter 3 . 8/31/2006 tnx for letting us know! |
| ArodLoverus2001 chapter 2 . 8/12/2006 so happy your going to make this a chapter story! keep up tbe fantastic work & plz update soon! |
