Reviews for Senabi's Arrow
Sonic and Knuckles chapter 3 . 8/21/2006
This is a great story and I bet I know what Jack is going to do (obviously) but I don't wan't it to be a JackXKIm. Either Raikim or OmiKim like you said before.
sweetprincess14 chapter 3 . 8/9/2006
uh oh whats going to happen plz update
CherryBlossom2 chapter 3 . 7/27/2006
oh no. this does not look good. please update soon. i love this story!
This.Lonely.Hour chapter 3 . 7/22/2006
OMG, I love it...CONTINUE! Please :)
Kolo Manuy chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Make chapter 4 or the world will be plunged into an icy darkness! bwahahahahahaha! Oh, and Nice Story
angela chapter 3 . 7/21/2006
hey good story! It's interesting. When will you make the fourth chapter. Make it soon. for me _
TruePinay4eva chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
go rai u can beat omi!
kawaii-4ever chapter 2 . 7/3/2006
yes! i always new jack liked kimi, but everybody knows she doesnt like him! she likes rai and uuh yea i would like that sneak peak cause this story is awesome!
spinningisfun chapter 2 . 7/1/2006
its realy good .I think the arrow should hit Kimiko so she falls in love with Rai and then Omi should stell it and also hit kimiko then she'd be in love with both of them. i would like a sneek peak
kimmy chapter 2 . 6/30/2006
ur story was great but can u send the sneak peek cuz i wanna read more it's awesome

luv ya

kimmy
superfreak9201 chapter 2 . 6/30/2006
please update soon!
CobaltNight chapter 2 . 6/29/2006
i reviewed your first chap and now this one just asking IS IT RAIKIM OR OMIKIM I NEED TO KNOW!also now i revewed i want that sneak peek as promised!
xxAngelofDethxx chapter 2 . 6/29/2006
The story's not too bad. I like it, good work.
Grust chapter 2 . 6/29/2006
You should make it hit Kimiko.
Suicidal RuBBerDucky chapter 2 . 6/29/2006
Things are only offensive when you think they're not a joke, and the likeliness of Wuya doing that is... 50%-50%? My calculator must be broken!

uh... anyway... good to see another chap up, and I agree it would be funny if he messed up. :)
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