Reviews for Senabi's Arrow |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story and I bet I know what Jack is going to do (obviously) but I don't wan't it to be a JackXKIm. Either Raikim or OmiKim like you said before. |
![]() ![]() ![]() uh oh whats going to happen plz update |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh no. this does not look good. please update soon. i love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, I love it...CONTINUE! Please :) |
![]() ![]() Make chapter 4 or the world will be plunged into an icy darkness! bwahahahahahaha! Oh, and Nice Story |
![]() ![]() hey good story! It's interesting. When will you make the fourth chapter. Make it soon. for me _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() go rai u can beat omi! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes! i always new jack liked kimi, but everybody knows she doesnt like him! she likes rai and uuh yea i would like that sneak peak cause this story is awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() its realy good .I think the arrow should hit Kimiko so she falls in love with Rai and then Omi should stell it and also hit kimiko then she'd be in love with both of them. i would like a sneek peak |
![]() ![]() ur story was great but can u send the sneak peek cuz i wanna read more it's awesome luv ya kimmy |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i reviewed your first chap and now this one just asking IS IT RAIKIM OR OMIKIM I NEED TO KNOW!also now i revewed i want that sneak peek as promised! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story's not too bad. I like it, good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should make it hit Kimiko. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Things are only offensive when you think they're not a joke, and the likeliness of Wuya doing that is... 50%-50%? My calculator must be broken! uh... anyway... good to see another chap up, and I agree it would be funny if he messed up. :) |